try to write about VRMMORPG.....first....a player that wants to be a Dark Lord,he is ruthless and knows what he wants a how,not a lame bastard like you generic VRMMORPG MC...Also RL thing is optional,since many people fail because of that.,the reason is because it is like trying to write about 2 different stories at the same time while trying to merge them!!!!!!!!!!

No wonder many have failed....no one gets it right...I mean,Loiterous....the author is getting the hang of it,not mixing it as much as others,the story is about VR,so write mostly about VR,not RL.That is precisely why most drop stories.

Variations of the idea are also welcome. I mean,c'mon,a player in his journey to become a Dark Lord,not giving much info in the description like many people....just give the basics and a few hints.Well,that is my idea,anyways.

Also,I am seeing too many tragedies.Don't use them.It is being incredibly overused.Unless you dont overuse sexual content...............yeah...Caligo Tenebris,THE HYBRID,Azran,etc.I AM LOOKING AT YOU!

Seriously...these people...it is being extremely overused...just tremove it...a new lovely story of a player,in his way to become a Dark Lord.And a bit after,since you need to know when to end a story.Many don't realise when to do that and then the story gets a lame ending.Same for games and books.

>>> Knight>>> Dark Knight>>>>>>Dark Lord?

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Now,now,Squire?

>>> Dark Knight>>>>>>Dark Lord?

Or a great player getting his character deleted because of the ASS of a ass(fill with ADM,game creator,main AI,god AI,godess AI,fake goody two-shoes,etc) that hates him for no reason.

I'm trying,OK? I mean,someone could ask me for tips and shit like that,i'm not good at writing,but at having ideas,possibilities,i have the ideas,but can't have them for myself,you see,so,could someone please try this one out as well?

ALSO have the NPCS BEING TRULY ALIVE

NOT SOME LAME LMS SHIT!!!( the AI is horrible for a VR,I mean,c'mon...)

And remember to remind yourself that the story has to meet its end. This idea needs at least 40 chapters min. Max is 120-140 depending on the author.

I Copyed and pasted asdergold1's comment so more people can read this this is sounds like a nice story and that's good advice for some authors I think, asdergold1 if you want me to delete this post for personal reasons just comment on this thread and I'll delete it within 1h-3 days