I know I took my sweet time, I said I’d be done in a month easy peasy and all that. That’s not what happened, obviously. I did underestimate my task quite badly and life’s been busy the past months so I only caught up to the time skip like two weeks ago. (No, I couldn’t have uploaded it earlier, I was on vacation and rarely sober which sounds like a bad combo to manage a book)
Now, is the rewrite worth reading? I mean, yes, but my opinion is quite biased so it's up to you to decide. The only chapters I left untouched are Exploring Options 1-4 and the History Lesson, the rest were almost completely reworked. The story is largely the same, the characters are the same, the main plot is the same, it’s the same idea and author… with that said I added a few chapters here and there (Not to dilute the content, I hate when authors do that) and mended some of the questionable events that irked quite a lot of you.
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This story was always meant to be about adventure at its core and I feel like I’m much closer to what I first imagined this time around. Aelion still isn’t a welcoming world and life sucks all the same but now I feel like the struggles lead somewhere and it’s not just infinite ‘misery porn’ as one of you readers said. (I’m stealing that btw xD)
Lastly, I’m looking for proof/beta-readers. I’m quite impulsive when it comes to writing and not all my ideas are good ideas and I think we all know how difficult it is to find the mistakes in your own work. A second rewrite is not an option, at least in my opinion, and so I need a little voice that whispers into my ears whenever I do something dumb.
Chapters every day until the time skip and I’m honestly surprised by how many people stuck around for almost two months… Thanks everyone and enjoy.