Uhm, so, I hoping to know what I did wrong writing this story. My story is so awful that it is 2.9 stars, so, uhm, I really want to know if there was anything that stood out to you guys. I'll definitely continue for a while because I am doing it for myself as well, but if it really is that terrible, then I don't want spew trash on the internet and I might as well relegate this to a personal hobby. No point in public participation if I am not really adding anything to the public.

A case of literary theft: this tale is not rightfully on Amazon; if you see it, report the violation.

I know I focus on a lot of intense topics, like cannibalism, rape, unsafe environments for trans individuals, and very poor mental health. I do believe it is possible to cover them and that they should be covered, but if I have mishandled the topics and really dropped the ball on them, please let me know.