Hi this is vinman here. this is my first Fanfic. I hope you all like it. I have taken idea from various fictions and novels and mixed it together and i am tryng to develop my character bit by bit not excessive OP. Please if you can give me your thoughts about how and where can I improve my story. It would be really helpful
5.LESSON
Luke knew his plan is progressing nicely and he needs diligently work towards successfully executing it.
Luke thought of learning Herbology in hope of clearing his block in Prime meridian channel to allow Ki or mana flow. He always hoped in his heart that he can do magic arts and prove to his father, family & world that he s not useless as they think of him. He spent his time before falling asleep with his only companion “Books”.
Luke woke up next morning early as usual and continued his Limit break training and herbs and tonic bath.
He swished off to finish his breakfast before any Family member arrives and gobbled the rich magical beasts meat and fruits and dashed off from his villa to Library. Entering the library Luke wished
Grandpa Hiru and went towards the books section. Grandpa Hiru enquired Luke about his new found enthusiasm and what books he is looking for.
Luke turned his head and answered, he is looking for books related to Ki or Mana control training with a big smile on his face.On seeing his face Grandpa Hiru pointed out the book section related to his query with a smile on his face. He always enjoyed Luke’s company and his enthusiasm always affected his old bones making him remember his youth days spent in search of knowledge.
Luke searched the section for books and finally found an old some what shabby type of leather binded book with the title “Ki & Mana control”. Luke knew this book would be from long time ago from its appearance and its written letter shapes. He was happy he found something that piqued his thirst for knowledge. He took down the book and seated on a chair and placed the book on the table and started skimming through the book.
Luke was happy he found out that the basic training for Ki & Mana control was meditating and trying to feel Ki or Mana within oneself first and then on to the next stage to create a vessel or container within the body and the third stage is to feel the mana or energy from the nature and replenish his mana or ki source. The Ki for warriors was difficult to replenish using nature but can be through meditation for some time.
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Luke found a way of meditation mentioned in the book to feel Mana or Ki. He memorized the method and was happy and excited to try it out. Time flew by and it was already noon, as he lost track of time while immersed in reading the book. He remembered his tutelage under teacher Sharon, he bid goodbye to Grandpa Hiru and dashed off to his home to finish his lunch and again dashed back to Herb shop in central plaza.
On reaching the shop, Luke knocked the door but there was no answer and he went in. There was no one in front and so he moved towards the back of the shop and there he saw angel watering the herbs with her jade like hands and small movements with her slender waist and her loose golden hair and humming.
He was mesmerized by the sight stood standing there and as Sharon turned, she dropped the watering can and screamed Hiya! And jumped backwards, startled by the sudden screaming Luke backstepped a bit and tried to apologize to Sharon for his sudden interruption.
Sharon cooled down a bit and with her head down said “I’m sorry I forgot about our appointment today was immersed with herbs” and apologized to Luke. Luke felt a shock and stammered for a while and finally saying “Sorry Teacher for startling you and should have waited in the front” with his hand scratching his head gleefully.
He commented saying her humming was very sweet with a childish face. Teacher Sharon got embarrassed and her face had become red due to his compliment and said “He..Hmm Ummm Thank you”, all the while her head was looking down not meeting the eye of Luke. Sharon awkwardness was due to her being a genius in herbology at age of 10 and by 15 years old she was teaching herbology to students who were probably girls. Her interaction with opposite gender was rare. Thus her interaction with Luke was akward.
Finally Sharon had cooled down and took a gulp of air adjusting her hair, she instructed Luke to come near the herbs. She mentioned she will start teaching him first by learning to watering and trimming and maintaining herbs.
She told first proper maintenance of herbs will teach Luke valuable things in herbology. So Luke’s first lesson continued for 2 weeks and Luke was listening to each and every word Sharon told him diligently