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3.Growth and Planning

Luke had decided to travel to Mt Raven as mentioned in the scroll. He pondered on how to go to Mt Raven and what reason should he give to his father.Normally roaming in and around the city for Luke,his father wouldnt be bothered about it.

If travelling outside the city, he wouldnt allow it. Even though he never shows concern his son Luke, he didnt want to lose face to others if his son met a mishap outside the city as other nobles would say he wantedly let his son die whom he considered embarrasment and useless to his family.

Luke pondered for a while and drifted into his sleep. Next day as usual he woke up early and set off for his physical warrior training. He practised his Limit break training by pushing his body to its limits. Unknown to Luke himself his body and his muscles began to shape up like an piece of art. At 9 years of age Luke was athletic build with no fat and properly shaped arms and abdomen and perfectly shaped chest.his height was little higher than those kids at his age.

By his continuous practice of limit break training, Luke body had began to absorb nature energy into his muscles. His previously blocked channels for mana flow had began to slowly wither down. But Luke never knew what was happening to his body as no one knew about absorbing natural energy to the body as mages maintained or borrowed natural energy to supplement their mana channel but couldnt absorb it into their body and warriors generally relied on qi. which is in similar case contained in body.

Alas naturally after every limit break training Luke felt as if his body was powered up and reborn a new. He felt his strength, stamina, reflex, vision, hearing and his senses increase.Little did Luke know his body was undergoing a monstrous transformation.

After his morning training he returned to his home and had a warm dip in his herbs and tonics mixed bath and cleaned himself and he ordered his servants to bring him his food. While doing his limit break training, his instructor had advised him in taking rich foods and so Luke choosed his diets with rich meat and vegetables.

The meat usually belonged to magical beasts which had natural energy absorbed into their flesh.Naturally for others it would boost their physical strength upto a certain extent but for Luke it enhanced his body development and natural energy absorption.

Luke quickly finished his food and made his way out of his villa and ran straight to library. He wished Grandpa Hiru and moved to geography study area.His mind made up a plan to go to Mt Raven and to find a suitablr excuse to give his father.

He took out a book called "Lands of Vestoria" from the shelf, a large book with a thick monster skin binded as a cover. The books maintained in the library were always neatly maintained by Grandpa Hiru whenever a book cover was damaged Grandpa Hiru always mended it with a new cover and never allowed dust to settle on in any section of books in the library.

As Luke began to read "Lands of Vestoria" he started to immerse himself for him who was branded powerless he was always alone with no companions his thirst for knowledge and books became his companions. He read about all the geographical information of landscapes in Vestoria.

His father Lord Pluto was a noble and a great battle mage who ruled Greena, a perfectural city with 9 smaller cities with a population of hundred million, It was a land blessed with flora and fauna and Mt Raven was within his region of control surrounding the Mt Raven was the Silent forest, as the name suggests it contained normal beasts such as foxes, boars and magical beasts of mid level ranks.

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Reading about geographical details of Mt Raven, Luke was thinking about his plan to visit Mt Raven. He left the library for his lunch to his villa and came back again. He went to Grandpa Hiru and asked him about books on herbs. He was directed towards the section of Herbology.

Luke went to the section and it consists of many sections each regarding different kinds of herbs for treatments and magical properties of different herbs, potent herbs and geographical locations of herbs, applications of different herbs. Luke stood there looking at different books on herbs wondering how people would be able to gather such precious information regarding herbs.

Luke was thinking of about the excuse he needed to give his father for going.He concluded that saying he was studying herbology and he wanted to discover and study new herbs found in Mt Raven.

With this in his mind he started studying about herbs and its properties and areas found around Mt Raven. And for the following 3 days he spent studying and gathering information about various herbs and its properties and uses.It took him a week to make himself familiar with the herbs in Mt Raven

As next part of his plan, he left library after bidding goodbye to Grandpa Hiru and he went back to his home in noon and finished his lunch and returned to his room waiting for his father.Luke had planned to learn herbology and he needed a master to teach him and to make his father believe he was learning herbology.

As night approached dinner was served in Pluto's family.They were seated in a majesticly designed large table and many different colours and flavors of foods.Lord Pluto was seated on one end of the table as centre adjacent to him was Prima. Luke entered the hall and sat on a chair opposite to Prima his mother.

Luke's presence was noticed by his father but he continued eating his dinner. His mother Prima enquired how Luke is and lately what he has been upto. Prima was one of the leaders at the mage academy and she spent most of her time in training talents seldom cared about family matters with excpetion to Kyle, Luke's elder brother a genius.

Luke finished his dinner and saw his father was about to leave the table and

Luke: Father

Pluto: what is it?

Luke: Father I'am planning to learn herbology

Pluto: What herbology, he snorted grumpily and said "What use does herbology do our family line is full of mage warriors"

Luke: Father you know I cant use magic arts and i can only train as a combat warrior without mana.I wished to learn herbology as it would increase my level of combat warrior as my body needs to develop to a level

Pluto: I know that you are useless in magical arts and I thought you would atleast develop into a saint level combat warrior by doing so you would atleast salvage some honour to our great family compared to your brother who is Pride of our family

Luke heart sunk when he heard his father talk about his brother a fire burned in his heart an desire to prove he is not useless but he grit his teeth, thinking everything will be proven in time

Luke: I need to train in herbology and I need a Master to teach me

Pluto: Hmm...Okay I will instruct George(butler) tomorrow to find you a teacher to teach you herbology

Luke's father left the table and all the while his mother was listening and bid him goodnight and left the table.Luke was alone sitting.He too left after a while of thought.He entered his room and his heart was paining, he wanted cry shout and curse but he didn't he knew when he cries that is when he would have given up on himself