Here is chapter 1, please comment what you think about this. Thanks
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With a flash I appear in Sehal Kingdom.
‘It feels like I am in another world. The buildings look so real too. Oh there is the fountain that Keane said, so this must be the central. Alright then I will start to explore this place first.’
Then I start to walk around. After 8 hours of walking around exploring and sight-seeing (which is 2 hours in rl), I am very tired and I think I roughly know where the buildings are located at. Then suddenly I heard a sound and something pop out in front of me.
Ding!
You have gain 1 vitality
‘It says that I have gain 1 vitality. If I remember right, the games I play say that vitality will increase health. And I am walking around for hours, and that cost stamina. Does vitality also mean stamina? Does that mean I can walk longer? After so long, I did not even check my stats. Ah well there will be time to check it in the future, I am in no rush.’ Then I heard the sound again, but this time the message was different.
Ding!
Your satiety has fallen below 10%.
All stat will be reduce by 50%.
Please eat something.
‘Hmm, I remember that every person starts with 10 bread if I did not heard wrong.’ I look around and found nothing, just newbie clothes that every person starts with. ‘This is a game right? Then there must be an inventory. But I found nothing. !!!!! If there is a screen with message, maybe there will be a screen that says inventory. Maybe if I say {inventory}, it will pop out.’
“Inventory.” After that a screen pop on that has 10 x 10 squares and 2 of the squares are fill with a picture of a bread and a canteen of water. ‘Aha, so I was right.’ Then I heard the sound again.
Ding!
It seems that you don’t even know something so obvious.
But something you don’t know is still something one don’t know.
So for using your brain to think about this and find success.
You have gain 1 intelligence.
‘It is good that I gain a stat…. But why is the message insulting me… It is literally saying that I am stupid…. Am I stupid? No, I am not stupid. Something that I don’t know is something one don’t know. No point thinking over. The past is in the past.’ Feeling more motivated while pondering this. Then…
Ding!
For thinking something that an experience old man would say.
You have gain 1 wisdom.
‘Mwahahahah, I gain 1 wisdom which means I become smarter. Wait… it say that I think like an old man….. !!!!’
“I am still sixteen!!!!!” Shouting out loud to the message in front of me and earning stares from people around me. Suddenly feeling embarrass, I run to another place. After a while I came to a park.
‘Well, now is no time to think about this, I need to eat something.’ So I pull out one loft of bread to eat. After I finish the loft of bread. I have an expressionless face and I decide to start looking for a restaurant. The bread taste like nothing!!! And if one doesn’t eat good food. His life will not look colorful!
As I am looking for food as I walk around, I suddenly bump into an old man when I am turning a corner. And the things he carries are scatter around.
“I am sorry, I did not look where I was going.” I say as I bend down to help him pick up the things which consist of fruits and herbs.
“Thanks.” The old man says.
Seeing that he has a lot of things he needs to carry. I feel like helping him.
“Here, I will help you carry these things. Where are you going?” I say
“Oh, you don’t have to. I am…” He replies but is cut short by me.
“I don’t mind. Besides I am in no hurry as of now.”
Since I already ate the bread, my satiety has risen to 70%. So I am in no hurry to find the restaurant. But I mean, you know eating a loft of tasteless bread is not enough. Not to mention, a loft of TASTELESS bread, how can that be enough?
“Then thanks for your help, young lad. By the way, my name is Quarzan. What is yours?”
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“Mine is Xan, so where are we going?”
“To my house, just follow me.”
After that I am struggling to keep up with him. For some reason, the bag I carry is a lot heavier than it looks. After 30 minutes, we reach Quarzan house which is in a dark valley and has a plate sing hanging in front of the door that says Quar’s Shop. Then I follow him into the house. When got in, I see a space in front of the counter and the back is shelf containing tubes of different liquid.
“Come in and put the bags on the table.” Says Quarzan going to the back of the house.
After I went in and put the bags down I went out to front house which is the shop and grab a chair and sit down. By the time I put the bags down, I was dead tired. ‘What in the blazes is in the bag!’ I wonder. Then I heard a familiar sound.
Ding!
You have gain 1 strength.
You have gain 1 vitality.
‘Hmm… does the mocking sentence only appear when I gain intelligence and wisdom? No use thinking over it.’ Then I start to look around.
‘This must be the potions. There are also a lot of colors. I wonder what that green potion does.’
“Hey Quarzan, I want to ask about this green potion. What does it do?”
“It is for regeneration.”
“Is regeneration different from the red potion? What I mean is isn’t the effect the same?” I ask
“No, it cannot be said like that. Here, I will explain it to you. The regeneration potion will increase your regeneration rate, it is like it will make your 1 hp per second to 5 hp per second and it will last for a time. The time limit and the regeneration rate will depend on the amount of reagents and the skill of the person who make it. For the red potion, it will take a few second to recover health to the amount it’s effect give. Like when you drink a health potion your hp will increase from 50/1000 to 550/1000 after a few second after drinking it. And the regeneration potion will be like 50 then 60 after 1 second, if another second pass it will be 70 and so on. So now do you know the difference?”
“I think I got the hang of it” I nodded as I reply
Then I noticed, some colors are slightly different, but they have the different prize and place at a different place.
“Even if the colors are slightly, a little bit different. Do they have different effect? Why it is the potion on the left shelf has a low prize where the potion on the right has a high prize. The colors are only, only a slightly tiny willy little bit different?”
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-Keen eyes
‘Whoa…. What is this? It says a new skill… Hmm, I will check it later.’
The old man is impress by me, since it was extremely hard to differentiate the colors then the effect of the potion, one could be make a deadly mistake if he is not a skill alchemist and did not identify the effect of the potion.
“You have really good eyes young man, not many can tell it apart. Well the potion on the left is a potion that buff attack and the potion on the right is a medium health potion. Since you look really interested, do you want to learn alchemy?”
Now, these really pique my interest. Different kinds of colors have different kind of effect.
“Yes, I want learn.” I reply
“Then, here take this. Finish this and memorize everything in it.” He says and takes out book that definitely looks like a DICTIONNARY and give it to me.
I stare at it for a long 10 second only then did I take the book and say
“I will try my best.”
‘Well it’s not like I don’t like to read.’
“Good, I want you to finish this in 1 week.”
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Meanwhile, at the keigh plains.
“Captain, we have clear the goblins around this area.”
“Ok, then we will camp here for the night. We will move to the forest next morning.”
“Yes captain.”
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