Author- This is not my first story I am picking this one up again. The title will be the same as before. I have deleted the old one and reposting this. This was my first ever story.
STORY START!!!
It was another boring day in London for the teenager Seff. He was only 14 this year (2032) an average Londoner born and bred in London. He had average looks average IQ and over all he was average except his deep in thought blue as an ocean eyes. He likes to daydream. ( A LOT xD)
**********Seff POV
Ahhhh I'm soooo~ bored *groul* and hungry
Seff grinned and onlookers thought he was crazy but didn't spare him another glance
I feel like having some McDonalds even though mom says not to come here, BUT that just makes me want to go more as they say the forbidden fruit is the sweetest.
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How unfortunate that his mom was right especially about the McD near his school it was super unhygienic and they just got rats, 2 in fact. Which just so happened to piss in the ketchup bottles and the staff didn't notice, since it was a Monday and the staff we're still tired from a wild weekend.( Typical )
Seff walked in and went to order.
-‘’I would like Big Mac burger with chips and a coke please ‘’
-‘’ £4.59 please ‘’
Seff gave her a fiver and got his change and meal
-‘’Can i have the ketchup bottle please ‘’ Asked Seff
-’’Sure’’
The staff gave Seff the bottle of ketchup the rats peed in!!!
Seff shook the ketchup a bit and then dumped a load of it on his chips and some on his burger.
He was so hungry he ate all of it in 2 min and didn't notice anything because he really didn't care he was so hungry he didn't taste anything wrong with the ketchup at all.
After 2 days Seff got ill he got vials disease that looks like a normal cold but isn't after a week and a half of him being ill Seff and his mother finally went to the doctors of course he just got some antibiotics and a syrup to help with the coughing. The antibiotics did help but only a tiny bit, after a week and a half of the disease eating away at his immune system that did nothing to help him. That continued for another week and by that time he was bedridden, his mom finally called an ambulance after he fell unconscious and didn't wake up no matter what she did.
They reached the hospital and Seff got accepted immediately, his mom explained everything that happened in the past 3 weeks. The docs then went on to do whatever they could but alas it was too late when they found out what was actually wrong
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Seff was dead.
****************Seff POV -After death.-
I feel nothing…Seff thought.
How strange it is to feel nothing, not cold,not hot,not comfortable...nothing at all. Thought the barely self-aware Seff.
After a while Seff got more and more self-aware, how long that too no one knows…
As he got more self-aware he remembered vaguely he was feeling very,very drained. Gradually he remembered he was very sick and then nothing. From that he came to the conclusion.~~~
What is this dark place, I can't see anything oh don't tell me this is where I'll wait until I get reincarnated? Not that it’s bad… it’s just boring...After a while...and lonely.
Hmmmm I wonder will I be reborn in the same boring world as before?
OMG I see a light... yes, finally my turn to get reincarnated! I hope I get to be in a more awesome world than my previous one.
Seff finally got engulfed by the light and got transported to where God was... as he thought god didn't have a form.
God looked at the new soul and got a shock because of all the points he had. Seff didn't notice this since God didn't have a face however.
God calmed down and did his job or should I say hobby, he enjoyed observing what the things he created will do humans and souls were especially fascinating.
God also noticed something strange Seff was totally silent and looked calm usually souls would start blabbering about where and what and why, which at times annoyed the almighty being to no end, and that's why angels took over quite often.
Finally god spoke.
‘’Hello Seff looks like you don't even know from what you died, well since it's my job I will tell you even if you don't want to know. Because it is quite amusing.’’ God took an exaggeratedly deep breath for more of a visual effect, but it just looked like a fuzzy cloud dispersing in the sky.
‘’You died because of ketchup from McDonalds ain't that a bummer hahahahaha! Now I know you want to talk and ask questions’’ God confidently declared.
Seff didn’t actually want to ask questions but he was kind of shocked nonetheless. I actually don't want to ask questions at the moment...I died from eating ketchup?!?!Should have listened to mom, not to go eat there....God must be a talkative and bored forcing me to know how I died… Oh well, who cares, I’m dead.
The fizzy being continued
‘’But you will have time for that latter. First of all because of your death, McDicks in your world shut down after the investigation regarding from where you could have gotten the vials disease, which was from ketchup you had after school in McDeath, Get it? Because you died because of them?’’ God tried to make a joke to which Seff just stayed silent.
Seriously? That is just so….sooo dumb…..I died you dick. Seff thought.
Gos seeing no reaction from Seff laughed awkwardly and continued his monolog in a serious voice one again.
‘’Haha… … Because of the socials system there, you must know they closed down the whole chain (in 2032 if any food chain got rats they get shut down everyone in the world because of the world law all the countries in the world made) because of that millions of lives were saved and you get to reap the rewards in your next life.
By using reincarnation points, You can get Abilities and Skills.As well as additional stats for example more starting mana.. like the novels in your world and I know you have read quite a few. Anyway here is the number of point you have 95,266,436 points to spend I suggest you start from the bottom the most expensive ones start there.’’ God finally finished his long ass speech with awful humour.
Author-If you would please input some ideas for skills and abilities except the obvious one which will be there world dragon