If you haven't read the Author Notes read here, after careful consideration I have decided to start this novel over. The reason for this being, I got 4 reviews and received a rating 2.5 stars without there being a actual review saying what wasn't liked about the story. There wasn't any comments about what they thought was being done wrong so I'm changing at my discretion. Also before you ask what about this version, I am going to finish it with the next two chapters I have already typed. These 7 chapters will be renamed "The Untold Beginning" and I hope to send out the revised novel by monday. Thanks for your support and I hope the revision is better than the original