Have you ever had a moment where you have done something you consider stupid or idiotic. Everyone who said no is one of three things an idiot, a liar, or someone who has amnesia. I am George and I had a theory that everyone in this world was an idiot and that I was just a little less idiotic than most. As it turns out I was wrong and am going to pay for my mistake.
“Pleaza don’t do this I got a family,” I begged in an obviously fake Italian accent.
“You know I can’t do that George,” said a man with black hair dressed in a black tuxedo,” and stop it with the fake accent it’s offensive.”
“Tch, Alright here’s your money Tiny Tim,” I said in defeat while handing 10,000,000$ over to him, “I knew that bet was suspicious.”
“Hmm, Tiny Tim aye, you haven’t called me that since middle school, so why now,” he inquired while taking the money out of my hands.
“It’s your punishment for takin my money, Im bringing it back,” I exclaimed proudly.
“So why did you accept the deal even if it was suspicious,” he asked?
“Cause I thought it was interesting, what else could it be,” I responded.
“Interesting, well the exit is through that door and straight down that corridor, he said with a slight smile, “And also do not and I mean absolutely do not go into any of the doors other than the one that says ‘exit’!”
After we said goodbye I went through the door and was met with a gloomy dark corridor with thousands of doors. The hallway seemed to repeat after each door.
“Well he always had a weird taste in work place,” I said while humming my favorite anime intro, “I guess it’s time to start walkin.”
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“growl” I hold my starving stomach and tell it, “its gonna be alright any moment now we will see the exit and then we can go to the nearest restraint and have a feast.”
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“I think the gloomy atmosphere is getting to me, I can almost see a guy holding a knife behind me and just silently following me”
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“hmm he is still there just to make sure he isn’t my imagination ill say hello.” I thought
“Umm… hi are you going the same direction or something?”
“Yesssss we are he he he,” he replied
“umm o….k,” I replied while thinking “im gunna make a run for it”
I immediately started sprinting as fast as I could from the creepy man. Then all of the sudden I tripped on something.
“oww that hurt,” I said while rubbing my head while I look at what I tripped on and what I see is something out of a horror film a human hand still bleeding. I release something akin to little girl screaming as if her life is on the line and pass out.
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This is realy the first thing I have ever wrote that wasn't for a test. So please tell me what you think and please tell me I do anything wrong.
P.S.- Also i encorage anyone to give me tips. I rate this chapter 3 stars out of 5 and 1 whole star of that is because its my baby. I dont realy like how i handled the ending.
P.P.S.- It takes me a long time to write things and alot of courage to upload it.