Authors notes
So im already starting over ay. Well Its been a while and if anyone has read my first atempt knows that im bad at writing.
Im gunna keep each atempt posted so people can see how and if I improve. Remember I have warned you that im bad. Also I decide things at random.
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BEEP BEEP BEEP I yawn, while energetically turning off my alarm clock. Today’s the day I challenge my rival in my first ever basketball match. My room is a small room with 1 bed and 1 dresser with a clean basketball uniform on top. It may not look like much but its been this way for the past 10 years and it aint gunna change. So I look on the bright side, its easy to clean.
I horridly put on my clothes, while rushing down the stairs. By the sound of the chopping my mom is in the kitchen. I open the door to leave for my game, but Mom stops me and says, “ You should at least eat some toast before you go.”
I said annoyed, “Just give it to me now and I’ll eat it on the way.” She gave me some toast and I was on my way to become a basketball master. I then ran through the door, while mom was saying, “Be careful of cars and albinos.” I reply with the overused, “I know I know,” and started running to court.
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While crossing a street I heard, “GET OUT OF THE WAY KID.” I look toward it only to find a speeding fire truck less than 10 meters away. It looked like I had enough time to get away, but then something hit my leg and I fell. Then CRASH, the truck collided into me and sent me flying. As I flew, it seemed as time slowed down I see everything I have done flash before me. I irritatingly slowly move my head to the side walk and see a man, not just any man a mine with white hair and red eyes, a man who was smiling with a look of hunger in his cold yet glowing eyes, a man which isn’t a man, it was a monster, it was my killer.
And everything fades black.
Authors ending
wasn' much was it. well I descided to start it alot like other things and end it like other things. its the next chapter which is gunna be better. Remember I do things on a wim or however you spell it also I know that I used horridly instead of hurriedly I just left it like that. [Mek-pendragon] If you dont like it wright your own thing than reading my badly written stuff.
P.s. I give this chapter 3.75. I like it.