Hello there, readers.

If you have read my other story, you will notice that I frequently tend to post inane things than chapters. If it gets too out of hand here, please remind me at once.

Now, I once had poll about three different stories that I could write. And out of that, the expected story Rise of the Mage won (It’s RR fare).

But as I started writing, I felt it too boring. So I changed it a little. Then I changed it a lot. And thus Thunderstorm came to be.

But I don’t know if you people will like it.

Now the first chapter is a long one. Give or take 8k words. You see where this is going?

I hope for a comment. Your opinion.

Not on grammar (you guys don’t care about grammar if the story is good, I know) but on whether you like the tone and flow of the story. Is it easy to read? Are the interruptions bad? Can you feel for the character?

This tale has been unlawfully obtained from Royal Road. If you discover it on Amazon, kindly report it.

Your opinion on the Main character. It’s the place where I had the most trouble writing and deciding. The entire story was written with a completely different character in mind (Merlin) who was then replaced (Nero). If you guys don’t like the MC, then I need to know.

And of course, if you point out your favourite scene and least favourite one, I will humbly thank you.

I know this will like, get perhaps 1 reply. Or 2. But it will be worth it.

And so, I declare the Thunderstorm’s  Author forum open! Feel free to ask questions, offer suggestions, write about events or scenarios or characters you want to see.