So........ I was reading through my own story and through some of the comments, and in doing so I realized something.

-first I have an interesting concept of a story to write about

-second, I have an interesting concept, but I suck at telling the story

To sum it up. Even I think it's a complete mess, with summary type description which I myself do not like and find very boring.......

Unauthorized tale usage: if you spot this story on Amazon, report the violation.

So I'm scrapping this version, and I'll redo it in a better style....... I'm going to be studying how others write and all that. So sorry for wasting ya'lls time. I promise though that one way or another, I will revive this story and tell an amazing story. so Peace out and read other novels for now. Mine will be back in its full glory lol