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The Shipbrain's Magic (old version)
Not a chapter: I'm going to do a rewrite.

Not a chapter: I'm going to do a rewrite.

I think that this isn't going to work. I have realized that my opinion that VR and physical rape are not the same thing has alienated enough readers that I no longer want to continue.

I've invested two weeks in this project and well, I can see its a doomed cause. Its not so much that I can't handle the criticism (I don't care that much). Its that I am pissed at myself.

I realize now that my mistake was more fundamental than what is or isn't rape, it was bothering to explore the topic at all. The truth was that the only reason I included it at all was to give the main character a reason to get mad and lash out, and there were plenty of safer ways to do that its amazing to me that I was dumb enough to explore a possible source of trauma that seemed interesting but ended up poisoning the rest of the story to the point were its made itself the central issue.

Stolen novel; please report.

That was never my intent and I apologize to everyone for my mistake. I will simply do a rewrite with no sexual content at all to save myself from all the headaches.

I should have the rewrite up in a few weeks, same basic premise but property sanitized of controversy. First five chapters will probably be the same, but after that, major changes. I will post more information as it becomes available.