Hello everyone who is still following this, I just wanted to see peoples thoughts on me possibly restarting this. By that I mean I would double check the story and then keep going from where I dropped this.
I am still not sure yet, I have another story I want to write that has a lot more back story and ideas already written out. Just checking to see what people think.
I forgot you need 500 words to post... Oh I have this part of the last chapter I was writing I can post...
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Zhi is sitting on a rooftop watching the main square of the outer city. On the north side of the square is a slightly raised wooden platform with a curtain surrounding it. About 10 minutes ago the walls surrounding it were pulled down to show the curtain, the platform underneath it and a small stage in front of it for someone to stand on. Zhi looks around and is happy to see the whole square is pretty packed with people. He had people spread rumors that today a special show would happen today and that you would be upset if you missed it.
After a few minutes Chen walked out of the curtain and looked around at the crowd of people. He still looked nervous, but after stepping in front of everyone he took a deep breath then projected his voice over the hum of the gathered mass of people.
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“Welcome people of Wong Jiang City, today you came here because you were promised a show. I can guarantee that this is a once in a lifetime show for all of you.”
There is some murmuring from the crowd but it seems like everyone is waiting for what the show is going to be. Chen looks over the crowd and smiles briefly for a moment before turning slightly and saying to the guards. “Take down the curtain.”
The guards pull on some rope and the curtain falls down, and a gasp is heard from the entire crowd of gathered people. Before the whole square goes deathly silent at what they see before them. As the guards gather up the curtain and move out of the way, Chen looks back towards the gathered people and says. “Behind me you can see the former heads of the Guowei, Lei, Jianjun, Tao, and Pengfei families. The men and their organizations who have terrorized the outer city of Wong Jiang City are no more!”
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Dang that still isn't enough... I just need to type 80 more words to be able to post something, so how are all of you?
Me? I am good thanks for asking. Just writing fan fiction for now. But I have been brain storming up a litrpg story and playing Fallout New Vegas.
Darn still need to write another 25 words.
Anyone a fan of Buddy Holly? He was a great singer and song writer, sucks he died so young. Would have been nice to see more work from him.