//AN. Hi there readers/potential fans I am the author of this title and with it being my first fiction and all want to allow you all to critique it in all its glory as long as its with reason of course. I currently don't know a release scheduled for I sort of want to get a bit of a feel of my writing pace and what people want such as short chapters on the daily or longer ones on the weekly. I understand my grammar is sort of shit so please tell me where it needs it cause it will only help me make something better in the end well without further ado here is the prologue please tell me your views on this as well and have a damn fine day why don't ya

The world of MORTAL COIL is vast and expansive with both of the layers of this realm as per say there are three the Mortal Coil,The Divine Coil, and the Void Coil. Going in depth of each of the sub realms starting with the Mortal coil it is basically the quadrillion's of worlds that are inhabited by mortals and have there own pantheon assigned to each of the habitable world's by the Divine coil basically its the realm of mortal beings that is overseen by the divine coil. Speaking of said coil the Divine coil is the realm of divine beings such as Demonic or Angelic no matter what though they are part of the same category as "GODS" they oversee the mortal coil and are overseen by the "HIGH GODS" . The high gods are beings that oversee the whole of the mortal coil not just individual planets. There realm in and of itself is all connected with each other and it is somewhat a mix between a sci-fi utopia mixed with medieval architecture (think like Asguard in thor comics) tech is super advanced but is based a bit weirdly in its strange outlook. The gods themselves are of a more modern mentality there is no weird cast of people or something and I can just say no Shakespearean speak of any god will ever be fucking tolerated!(don't hate Shakespeare just hate ole speech makes me want to bash my head in) basically think of a society of modern day thinking if not a bit more advanced in a dark age architecture world. Not to say there isn't diversity thanks to the mortal coils influence on there respective gods (you'd be surprised how much video game's and malls took over the Divine Coil it was really crazy) thank void for that . On to that topic the void is more or less all the coils in there entirety though between you and me the void is a chill dude who is at the center of all existence who is basically creation itself and he writes what's happening in the coil as it happens cause he loves his creations and doesn't mind writing them on some of there fan fiction sights on other worlds with internet (basically me even if this is my first fiction bleh the void is my mind-scape more or less and the coil in essence apart of it). So that basically sums up the world/realm/'s save the innerworkings and the powers that reside heheheh there is something all world of the coil have in common and its my fave thing ever!!!!!. OK so here's the deal think of your soul and all things that encompass your being as a whole whether you like guns,blades,fists,magic what if I said that your soul transforms into an embodiment of power no matter what at the age of 15,if not sooner its when the damn void feels your damn good and ready and mature enoph not to play with the toy he so graciously gives you half assedly and kill yourself (fuckin plebs). Basically your soul transforms into your being so to speak. Basically giant magical mech suits that are embodiment's of who you are and what you are that includes the good and bad. at the age of soul awakening you are basically given a Soul armor vary in size though most are like giant mecha granted there is no real tech involved its sort of a class sort of like mage,warrior,archer etc with its various sub types literally name it and its around. Not to say there are not special named soul armor's *Cough* like Harlie Quinn the embodiment of the jester even if its more of an assassin class heh. Either way you'd need them in this place cause its really no joke I made living a battle field in all the world's whether it be by Monsters or ahem certain lost/undead/dark souls that vary off and become living armor with no main body that will more or less fight you any way they can. Not to mention that everyone has the power to summon powerful mecha that can cause a lot of damage and those who want to use it for there own gain (as long as your not an idiot and can use the armor ill give it to you you fucks!) oh btw did I mention that your soul is also sort of like an inboard AI when you awaken? I didn't well shit man congrats on your new BFF they usually complement you very well so don't worry just hope you don't get someone like that damn jester he's basically chaos incarnate though the ones that usually get him are pretty well off with it either way I know you will have fun in my world cause why the fuck wouldn't you bastard's AHAHAHAHA. On to matters I just wrote something interesting basically the HIGH god of order just impregnated someone on the mortal realm something that has never been done before HA!!!! Holy shit cool That means he will be a being of both coils oh shit man and I think he just left her wow wtf dick guess he cant take the responsibility of raising a damn kid with havening to run a whole universe and all he probably wont even know he has one....fuck That guy, Oh well I never had my dad so its chill lil one ill put extra special eyes on you your going to do some fun stuff I just know it AAHAHAHH I wonder what your Divine title will be hmm, oh I got it how about the god of BALANCE heheh I like it both chaotic and orderly it so fucking fits and it might even spite your bastard of a father HAHAHAHAHA now I think I should give you one last gift and then continue my role as the omnipotent observer hmm how about a soul embodiment no one in all of the realms has seen at all heh someone who is judge jury and executioner for all souls as he ferry's them to either hell or heaven YEAH I like it! GET OVER HERE!!!!!

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There all said and done now kid provide me with the fun you will show my realm I cant wait!!!

//Closing statements (CS) Okay I think that this is alright for now anything wrong please tell me would ya? and also tell me your thoughts on the world I have built and if you have any suggestions I already have a few layouts in my head but nothing concrete. Thanks for reading so far and have a good day Less you be prickish!