//AN: Greetings readers/potential fan's I do hope you like the concepts I proposed for the realm in the last post. If there are any mistakes that you see or suggestions for the story please pm or comment on the post and have a good ole day why dont cha!
Any comments made by "Void" will be in () and will really do nothing to the story as of yet other than provide another perspective by the ever watching observer and they will be few and far between just little quips here and there more or less.
inner thoughts will be within ~?~
Ciara's PoV- BlackRock Inn /Tamara city /Country of Alkin
~There I was just turned 19 and in the big city away from my rural village on the outskirts of Alkin the country I was currently inhabiting. Waking up naked in my bed in the inn I was staying at alone, "Huh?" Alone?,Wasn't there someone with me? 'Headache kicks in' *groan* ah shit I should not of drunk that much last night I had just gotten into the city and was so excited I decided to celebrate and me and that man were flirting all night, now I remember oh my gods was he good in bed 'Blush'. Wait since he's not here, " DID THAT ASS HOLE DITCH ME!?" that fucker! he said I was the most beautiful woman he had ever seen, that he wanted to take me out sometime,He just wanted my body didn't he!?~ (Yup)getting up from the bed and walking over to the mirror in the room Ciara looks upon herself, shoulder length jet black hair and caramel brown eyes meet her own gaze looking closer to her tanned body *sigh* "Welp no use mulling over stupid ass holes I need to go meet up with my sister!"
Heading out of the inn with her things a loose black cotton shirt and some jeans with her backpack of food and other necessities for a woman moving to a city with her only living relative. Getting a better look of her surroundings since she arrived last night and didn't get to see the city in all its glory she could see the hustling and bustling of the city the Magi Rail System or MRS going 30 feet above her, Basically its a metal box that is guided by magic by a set destination of array's in the sky of the city's roadways that transports to select stops. Speaking of the roadways there were people all around with a place to go from a merchant peddling his wares to the bulky armored guard patrol of the city. With a big grin Ciara starts making her way to the MRS station to wait for the next box to the upper midtown district were her sister Kara was with her well off merchant of a husband named Keln. She would have been there last night if the MRS system wasn't shut off by the time she came into town and walking these streets at night would be trouble no matter what. Remembering why she was here she looks at the bag in her hands with two safely placed urns in its clutch she wears a sadden expression at the death of her parents from an monster attack a few weeks ago in there rural village. " Wonder if I can start a life here now" Ciara says with a somewhat downtrodden expression as the box pulls in to the stop and she gets in but as the door shut she reveals a happy smile and states "Of course I will I am me! HA" not paying attention to the passerby quickening there pace from the woman that was talking to herself.
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Getting off at the next stop Ciara looks around for the house that was described to her as being her sisters residence. Finally finding the place shes looking for a 2 story house with tiled roofing and polished wooden walls with a red wooden door. Ciara being so excited Barged into the door yelling for kara only to see a couple making love in the living room. Completely stopping staring at the intruder with beet red faces of anger and embarrassment Ciara's appearance taking the latter as she ran out the house to escape her sisters ever looming wrath she could hear "CIARA!!!" as the rumble of a soul armor crashing through the house's roof ~ shit shit shit HELP ME GOD DAMMIT!~(AHAHAHAAHA)
//CS:
Wanted to give an example of basic soul armor types -rouge,warrior,tank,mage,archer-
http://fantasyinspiration.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/11/ahbiasaaja2-8.jpg
Kara's soul armor is representative to the rouge concept:
http://imgs.abduzeedo.com/files/articles/beautiful-mecha-design-reza-ilyasa/chronicles_of_the_void_2_by_ahbiasaaja-d38lq7h.jpg
just think a bit more feminine features and more or a dark purple paint job instead of the blues
well I think that a good CH1 so far any mistakes or suggestions please do tell hope you enjoyed it anything to ask please do and remember have a good day.