Since deciding to begin rewriting sections of the story, I have found:

1) Scenes that could be better described, explored or built;

2) Scenes that were mostly unnecessary; and most of all

3) A different writing style that I believe fits better with how I like to write, especially dialog.

If you discover this tale on Amazon, be aware that it has been stolen. Please report the violation.

Since I'll need to rewrite it from the ground up, I'll launch a separate fiction page when the time comes, which will be announced here.

Please be aware this fiction page won't continue the story, which will be moved elsewhere at a later date, so you may avoid wasting time.

I wish you all a pleasant time reading, and hope to live up to (or perhaps surpass) expectations when I resume posting.

The final announcement in this fiction page will be when the new "home" for the story is properly set up, to redirect the current readers.

Lastly, I'm sorry for the wasteful way I kept this page unapdated, and hope you can forgive me and maybe give the story another shot when it has a proper length already posted.