As soon as Evan had drifted back into the void the woman pulled out a screen. She moved some items around on the screen for a bit and closed the screen.” We need more people like him. I think the others will agree letting his personality pass on to the next life is okay.” She shifted out of the reception space and appeared in a massive pantheon. Tall spiraling pillars covered the perimeter that holds a massive domed ceiling. She walk to a table and chair and sat down. She pulled up three different screens and laid them on the table.

“I was surprised at the boy’s giving up memories for the safety in numbers for those siblings, but the girl truly surprised me. She gave up most of her memories just to be near the boy. Her brother gave all but one memory just to be able to protect his sister. Those three, I feel, are going to be inseparable whether it be this life of the next.” As she was immersing herself with the three’s different choices a large hand slammed on the table.

Very loud shouting,“Hey Vera, Whatchu doin?”

‘Why does he have to be so annoyingly nosy, and loud.’?” Hello Hephie nice to see you too. And if you must know I was finalizing a batch of Rebirths. Higher ups, not that they did anything wrong,’ Ass-hats messing with fate,’ accidentally changed the landscape with three people in the cross fire. So we compensated them as for their loss. Nothing too out of the norm though.”

“Sounds troublesome, anyone in the group interesting? Aint got nothing to do since they suspended me indefinitely. I swore that kid said he wanted to be a goblin, at least he got a cool power.”

Chuckling,” well that’s what, the second no third time this happened. Let’s see: goblin, slime, o and that mimicking thing.”

Now mad he shouts,” Slime, okay that’s lame, Goblin, great potential, but don’t dog on mimics. I thought that was the most potential based race. I mean, let’s say he eats a dead dragon, injured god, a planet? Infinite possibilities with that one, he did say I want to earn his op-ness, whatever that meant.

Feeling he was poked enough Vera backed down

“Okay okay I give, but I truly think these three will be interesting to watch grow up. I think I will set my DVR to record them, probably clear out the old recordings.”

Now interested Hephie picks up the three screens and a grin appears on his face.

“I think you may be right, these three will be interesting. You haven’t submitted these yet right?” With a nod of confirmation, he adds a few things on Evan’s chart out of his our divinity

“With this I definitely will be watching these three.” He hit the finalize and the sheet was scanned and an approved stamp appears in the corner

Vera snatched the sheet away and looked for changes. As she look farther down she noticed the change and her jaw dropped.

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Righteous Murder

The public’s opinion on killing corrupted individuals more open to the person holding this title

Stats Multiplied .1% per Kill of corrupt individuals

Stacks not limited

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Vera equally pissed and happy about this happening. Pissed that if something happens, she going to get her assed chewed out for favoring people. At the same time she is happy, because she had looked at the world they were being sent to. Filthy and in needing of a purge or apocalypse, that was her first opinion when she saw this. Feeling the only thing left to do was to sit back and watch it happen she hopped up, ignoring Hephie and his attempts to converse, and ran back to her pocket dimension to watch it all unfold. When she got back she turned to the channel that was for watching Rebirths. She inputted his soul ID and sat back and watched. The whole room shimmered and turned into a rundown farm house room. She watched baby Evan crawling on the floor in a third person as a hologram.

“I love it at this stage of growth. Babies are so cu.., No Bad baby don’t put that in your mouth. Gah I hate not being corporal.”

As if the idea struck her with lightning she hoped up and submitted a term of leave from the Rebirth department. She then went to the sub conscience department. After a small wait she got hired and she submitted the soul Id of Evan as her target soul to follow. After transferring the current sub conscience to a different soul she went back to her pocket dimension. She sat back and enter his soul as a sub conscience.

“All Right where to start. Hmm, since he has that Righteous Murderer thing he needs to be strong. Start the training montage, queue the Rocky training playlist.”

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Hey guys I know this is short, but it felt right to stop there. I liked the whole god/watchwoman thing and wanted to know if you wanted this or keep to Evans POV. The reason I liked this was it would be boring until he forms words and morals. If you guys like it like this just vote up top Yay or Nay. (Btw if you guys say Yes I will keep her there till he can think and act without her guidance.  she's like training wheels fir Evan. She will become like a part time narrator and point things out or comment on actions.)

Thanks Guys.