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2 days have passed since the pirate attack. Ever since then, everyone on the ship was in awe of Aesar and Ryfon. Some asked various questions as to their identity and origins. Other stayed away from the exuding amount of power the two displayed, fearing and admiring from afar, while presuming that they were in the presence of a Gold – if not, Platinum rank individuals.
It was clear that everyone on the ship were constantly talking about them in excitement and admiration.
However, Aesar and Ryfon did not like the attention they were receiving and ignored everyone. From this, everyone who wanted to open up to them after the pirate attack stopped their advances and kept their distance. None dared to annoy them further. Even when some passenger would talk about them, when they would appear, they would soon silence and stare.
After the pirate attack, 13 slaves and 7 pirates were inside the 3 pirate ships during Aesar and Ryfon’s execution. On Valentines’ orders, the remaining pirates were beheaded and thrown into the ocean. Some of the passengers refuted her barbaric actions, but was quickly silenced when she coldheartedly told them that she would not waste food and money on keeping those criminals alive. Realizing that they could not persuade her actions, they returned to their rooms, to not observe the pirates demise.
The 13 slaves were taken care of by some of Valentines crew members. They were feed and afterwards they rested on top of the deck. To Valentines surprise, the slaves were not in such a terrible state. They were a bit skinny, had a few scars, and their mind still seemed strong, but nothing major. For a slave of a pirate ship, they were quite fine for the most part.
Valentine couldn’t find a way to interact with Aesar and Ryfon after 2 days of the pirate attack. She was nervous and overall couldn’t get herself to talk with them. This was a first for her. To ask about whom they were, or what they were doing, was not her. She had only ever observed people she had a piqued interest with, for entertainment. Her ship was nearing Reddell City in Galedria Kingdom; she wanted to satisfy her curiosity. It did not help that she condescendingly observed Ryfon on their first meeting.
***Aesar POV***
Across from where I sat were two beautiful, young women. Susan, with brown, short hair braided that revealed a strong, stunning beauty. Her piercing blue eyes were concentrated on Ryfon.
However, my main attention was on Isabel. Her brown, long hair slightly covers a full, friendly face. Glittering blue eyes were delightedly fixed on my own, as we talked about each other untroubled.
Ryfon and I were taking an immense liking to the two girls. They were very kind and confortable to be with. During the past 4 days sailing, we got to know each other very well. They even talked about what their relationship they had with Valentine. The subject of discussion went deeper as hours passed.
From what they told me and Ryfon, Isabel and Susan were sisters that used to be in a middle class family in Vacien Kingdom. They schooled in a small mage academy to improve their good potential in magic.
9 years ago, their mother and father were killed by Orc bandits when they were returning home after selling merchandise in a neighboring town. It took a while for them to receive the devastating news of their parent’s deaths. And when they received the news, they were a complete loss and devastation. But With the friends their parents made, they were able to receive some form support.
A few months after their parent’s death, Valentine came to their place to visit her sister, who was Isabel’s and Susan’s mother. She did not take her sister’s death very well and mourned for days as her heart ached for her beloved sister. Having only her sister’s daughter as her family, Valentine decided to take Isabel and Susan under her wing afterwards.
For many years Isabel and Susan were supported by Valentine. Whenever the two girls were on their vacation, they would help Valentine with her job. However, it did not go well the first time. It took a lot of convincing and time before Valentine would allow their participation on managing her ship. After Isabel and Susan matured, Valentine finally gave in on their demands. However, Valentine had to increase the combatants on her ship to assure her nieces’ safety.
We continued to talk as the day grew dimmer.
When night came, Isabel sat up from her seat a stretched out her arms. Upon a closer look of her face, she had a contemplating with a hint of sadness. After a brief moment, she asked anxiously, “Where do you think we can see each other again, after tomorrow?"
At her question, Susan turned silent and had her head down, seeming sadden by the upcoming events.
I stayed silent, signaling for Ryfon to say something.
“Don’t look upset, me and Aesar will come and visit you two again.” Ryfon turned his head towards me then stared back at the two girls “We promise,” he said with a smile.
***Ryfon POV***
The morning rays of the sun and soft breeze against my skin felt incredible, like being hugged by happiness itself.
Off the distance I could see land. It was Galedria Kingdom.
I then turned my attention on the ship. On the bridge was Valentine, who was startled by my sudden glance directed towards her. ‘I can’t blame her for her current view on me. I’ve never really had a good indication of my Power Ranking. For sure though, I am Gold or better. I had a fight with a Gold rank adventurer 80 years ago and won easily. The Power Ranking is very interesting, and I would love to know about where Aesar and I would stand on the rankings. Perhaps, I should join the Adventurer’s Guild and rank up to where my power stands or fight a Platinum rank. There are also Legends, so called Heroes, and Sages that would be interesting to meet to test my strength on aside from Aesar. Or maybe even deities, ha ha ha.’
After I was immersed in my thoughts, I made my way toward Isabel, and Susan, who stopped casting wind spells a moment ago, and I ignored the stares directed at me as I walked.
Before I could even say anything to greet them, Susan hastily asked, “You haven’t forgotten where we live in Vacien, right? And if you’re lost, just ask. And remember, we’re here on Valentines’ ship during the Fire season (summer). Be careful when you’re looking for that person in Cyri Empire, making enemies there can spell doom.”
I told Isabel and Susan that Aesar and I were looking for a relative in Cyri Empire that hasn’t contacted us in a while. I didn’t tell her the truth for obvious reasons.
I smiled and cut her off, “Okay, okay. And as for you and Isabel, become the greatest mage.”
“We surely will,” Isabel inserted herself in the conversation with a determined look.
Both Isabel and Susan were impressed by Aesar’s and my power after they were informed of our accomplishment during the pirate attack. Upon being informed, they received a spark of incredible amount of aspiration to become stronger.
Shortly after I engaged a conversation with the two girls, Aesar appeared from the lower deck. He had a saddened look on his face. Meeting Isabel and Susan was what we needed, but now, we have to experience another sorrowful farewell.
The rest of the way, we remained silent as the land of Galedria Kingdom grew into size as we neared. On the shore of Galedria was a city called Reddell City. The city wasn’t as impressive as Crystal City, but in no way does it mean that Reddell City was lacking. Similar to Crystal City, Reddell City was surrounded by massive walls, but the walls that face the ocean were shorter.
The city was sloped up from the ocean so the entire city was visible, not having the wall hindering the view. The buildings were similar to Crystal City; all the buildings were finely built with white or beige colored stone.
Near the docking area were seagulls, and other birds of prey either perched or circling around the fisher men’s area. And along the waters, were various boats either docking or sailing from where we just came from. Just like Crystal City’s port, it was very busy.
Nothing’s really change since the last time I’ve been here.
After the ship docked, and every other passenger aside from me and Aesar left, Isabel and Susan said their goodbyes and future plans for meeting again.
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AN: This novel is VERY adventure heavy. Some characters may just come and go, but some may even show up unexpectedly later on (even WAY later on).
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Encyclopedia (did some minor edits on the life span)
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Aesar:
Items:
Weapons: Greatsword - Blade length: 1meter/48in/4ft (not including the handle) Color: Silver
Money: Platinum coiuns:0 Gold coins:20 Silver coins:4 Copper coins:10
Ryfon:
Items:
Weapons: Dual wield swords - Blade length: 76cm/30inches (not including the handle) Color: Silver
Money: Platinum coiuns:10 Gold coins:12 Silver coins:26 Copper coins:10
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Currency:
50 copper coins = 1 silver coin
50 silver coins = 1 gold coin
50 gold coins = 1 platinum coin
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Power/Adventurer ranking:
1. Copper
2. Bronze
3. Iron
4. Steel
5. Silver
6. Gold
7. Platinum
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Monster rankings:
1. White
2. Green
3. Yellow
4. Orange
5. Red
6. Blue
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Lifespan of MAJOR Races:
Mana capacity of an individual as well as its power can affect his/her lifespan(A human with large capacity/refined mana may live up to 500 years).
Humans 85-200 years
Beastmen 85-200 years
Naga 85-200 years
Elves 600 years
Angels 800 years
Demons 600-1,000 years
Dragons 50,000-70,000 years
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Story INFO:
Legion One operates inside the village - 100.
Legion Two, guards the walls and are excellent in defending - 400.
Legion Three operates outside the village to hunt, scout, exterminate and defend - 500.
Legion Four is the elites - 50 of them.
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Characters
Aesar Loraven - Appearance:
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Height: 1.90m(6'2ft); Elf-like ears, very light gray skin, obsidian colored eyes and short hair, toned and nicely built body.
Ryfon Daesatra - Appearance:
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height: 1.89m(6'2), an elf, crimson eyes.
Amara Loraven - Appearance:
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long mint green hair, dark blue eyes that would rival a sapphire, flawless fair skin, and a body with perfect proportions.
Agis Loraven - Amar's father and the village chief of Mytethnaes
Ralnor - Legion 4 general
Mylaela - Legion 2 general
Agis Loraven - Amar's father and the village chief of Mytethnaes
Ralnor - Legion 4 general
Mylaela - Legion 2 general
Rhalyf - Legion 3 general Appearance
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Long golden hair tied into a ponytail
Varan - Legion 1 general
Zaos Kearoris - Legion 4 commander Appearance
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Long blonde hair
Tyvollus - Captain of the elite guard of Agis' household
Tanithil - Elite guard of Agis' household
Elder Khilseith - Elder
Stiria - Female Dragon
Appearance:
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Piercing emerald eyes that glowed sat gracefully within the creature's
scaled, angular skull, which gave the creature a terrifying appearance.
Two small, horns sat atop its head, just above its long, sharp ears. Its nose was wide and had two narrow, curved
nostrils. Several rows of large teeth could be seen as it opened its mouth giving it a slight hint at the terror inside.
Its neck, twice the length of its head runs down from its head and into a large body. The top was covered in
armor like scale and a row of small spikes ran down its spine.
Its bottom was covered in massive scales and was colored much lighter than the rest of its body. Two muscular
limbs carry its body and allow the creature to stand sturdy and tall. Each limb had 6 digits, each of which end in
thick, black claws
Graceful wings grew starting from just below its shoulders and end at the lower end of its back. The wings are
almost demonic, the skin of the wings seems to glow as if made from fire itself and armor-like scales grow on top
of the wing's primary bones.
Its elegant tail ends in a spear-like growth and was covered in the same armor-like scale as its body.
Elride -
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Human. a large, hardened looking Elf, about 2meters tall
Renna -
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She had brown eyes, and long brown hair tied into a pony tail.
Valentine - captain of Nereid Beauty -
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tight brown pants the complimented her wondrous curves and long legs.
nice waistline and generous breast that were greedily covered by her silver leather armor. almond brown eyes and hair
Isabel -
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Her brown, long hair slightly covers a full, friendly face. Glittering blue eyes
Susan -
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brown, short hair braided that revealed a strong, stunning beauty. Her piercing blue eyes
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Locations (So far):
Forest of Asteria
Mytethnaes - village
Casaluna - village
Crystal City
Reddell City
***Kingdoms/Empires***
Demon Continent
Cyri Empire * (Human hierarchy)
Kingdom Of Zirani * (Human hierarchy)
Kingdom Of Deradia * (Beastmen hierarchy)
Kingdom Of Ocoesean * (Naga hierarchy)
Kingdom Of Edendas * (Elf hierarchy)
Kingdom Of Dokath * (Human hierarchy)
Kingdom Of Eleilla * (Elf hierarchy)
Kingdom Of Vacien * (Human hierarchy)
Kingdom Of Galedria * (Elf hierarchy)
Kingdom Of Aderin * (Elf hierarchy)
Kingdom Of Zoswen * (Human hierarchy)
Kingdom Of Astac * (Human hierarchy)
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