Hello! For the past month or so, I've been re-writing the whole thing from scratch. As of now, I'm on chapter 6, and I'm fairly happy with how things have turned out. The original was just horrible. I'm honestly surprised people didn't just drop it straight away. The new version is still by no means a masterpiece or even good at all, but I'm sure you'll like it a lot more.

I will be releasing the new version on Royal Road but not before the first draft is complete. This way, I can go back and edit without having to worry about deadlines. It's just overall going to be a lot better than releasing chapter by chapter. Of course, this will take a while, but I think It'll be worth it.

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For the regular readers: if you want to beta-read the re-written chapters before release, pm me or leave a comment. I'll select a few in a couple of weeks/months when I feel like it needs reading. Currently, the prologue especially still needs a bit of tweaking before I'm comfortable sharing it.

Thanks for reading!