Hi All,

I have just updated Chapter 14.4. There is nothing in there that will affect the storyline and I tried to keep it as low impact as possible.

I have expanded the reasons why Mors charged into the forest which leads to Ethemeusa's demise. There was a lot more left to the imagination/hints than I originally thought.

(Summary of changes)

When Mors was able to take a breath after being winded, he was able to smell a person who was in the summoning chamber (the 'mysterious' one that escaped that wasn't the the general, king or his men. (Hinted at when Mors woke up first with Verz and her team).

New bits added:

- Clearly stating that it is Mors senses (smell) that was the trigger (This was only hinted at)

- The memories that resurface in Mors' mind, causing him to lose himself to his anger.

- Expanded the info that hinted at Mors being dazed/not thinking clearly (didn't do too much to this as I didn't want it to be too much of an excuse)

The narrative has been taken without permission. Report any sightings.

- Added in an extra push/hint (A 'familiar' chuckle on the wind) that throws Mors over the edge.

I know a few have commented stating that these are excuses made after I made the mistake of 'thoughtlessly' killing off Ethemeusa. I hope you believe me when I say that this was always intended (Yes I did make a joke about killing her off because of the name) and I have not changed the story in any way other than being more explicit with what is going on. 

I beg you as a crappy author who only writes for fun (and the awesome comments you guys provide) that if I do end up being too vague on bits, to let me know and not let me get away with 'It makes sense when explained'.

@ROCEIL if you are still reading (or see this), thank you ever so much for providing the final motivation needed to clean up that chapter. I know it's not perfect but the changes I want to make would impact multiple chapters (Where I attempted to explain the situation) so I am 'damage controlling' at this point with the intent at bookend, to come back and do it properly before book 2. Sorry, you disliked the story so much but know that I have taken the positive criticism to heart and will endeavour to do better :) [https://forum.royalroadl.com/images/smilies/smile.png]

I am in the process of finalising the next chapter, expect it out today or tomorrow at the latest. :) [https://forum.royalroadl.com/images/smilies/smile.png]  

Once again, thanks for reading! You guys rock.