I wanted to take some time to explain some things here. Recently, my story was called a 'murder porn'--which, to be honest, hit really hard. Appartently, the reader did not like the part where Soren had the outburst and killed the girls in the jungle. And he was also not the first one call it a torture porn. So, first small point-- I dont know about you guys but I wouldnt call what Soren did a 'torture'. It was just a slow method of killing someone, instead of giving them a quick death. But thats just my personal opinion, so lets forget that for now.
Next, I wanted to explain a bit about what happened there. If you would read those lines again, you would find some parts that wont make sense(it will later on in the story)--like him getting angry at himself and stuff. That outburst of his actually has a backstory which will connect to the main story. Please know that I follow the concept of actions and consequences. And the actions preceding that time was not enough to entail that change in him. But this is only for the part where he said those his words at that time. The killings of the girls was him genuinely wanting to kill them while making them feel pain. It was not because he hated them. But was just a matter of displaced anger.
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So, if you guys also feel that this story is only murder porn where mc kills and tortures for fun based on that one incident, then I would ask you guys to not stop reading just becasue of it--I'll explain it all in due time. Of course, I am not saying that it was a one time event. As I've said it already in my description of the story, mc is not a nice guy. He will kill and torture even innocent people if he needed to and would burn down towns if it would help his cause. So, if any of you guys cant stomach that, then I would respectfully ask you to stop reading at this point-- because it will only get more gruesome. But given that you guys have read my story this far, I am sure none of you are like that and will continue--given that I provide a good story for you. So, here's me hoping for your continued support as I give you the story thats in my head. Also, I created a poll (just for fun) to see how many of you guys are totally fine with that action, or didnt like it and stuff.
Anyway, another chapter is coming out soon--few hours at max(I only have to edit it right now)