One thing I really dislike is messing up the order of the chapters, which is why I will lock my submissions as soon as I publish them. Everyone is welcome to comment/proofread/etc about them in here.
As for the fanfic: I'm making up names on the fly (so don't bother researching city names etc), though I will try to mix mythology in later as I can. I have a definite plot in my head, and I started writing since I check the website a lot at times.
If you stumble upon this tale on Amazon, it's taken without the author's consent. Report it.
Hope you guys enjoy.