Honestly, surprisingly few things I actually needed to go address. Lots of notifications were just people responding to my responses. But either way, that's good that people are engaging, it makes me happy to see. :D
idk if I'll get another chapter out today, still feeling a little worn out from my weekend of fun. Buit Monday I'll be back in full swing for sure, I'll still being doing some writing today so I will at least have something to jumpstart monday if I don't release it today.
DA FIXES
CHAPTER 3
Changing this to be more explicit in why he doesn’t look into every single class and to give more of an explanation why he doesn’t look at other classes going forward. He’s filtering classes to combat ones.
Original
Class List -
[Laborer], [Reader], [Cook], [Musician], [Teacher], [Apprentice], [Scientist], [Construction Worker], [Architect], [Actor], [Adventurer], [Farmer], [Botanist], [Student], [Chemist]...
There were a dizzying number of choices to choose from, the more mundane ones happened to be towards the top. I hesitated briefly looking at [Musician] and [Teacher]. At one point in my life I had wanted to be a music teacher and had been studying for that. It never really panned out for me, half of it seemed to be the world conspiring against me to make it as hard as possible to take the classes with various circumstances constantly coming up. The other half was I just stopped caring. Whatever, that’s in the past now. Nothing would stop me from playing instruments anyways, even if I have a combat oriented class. In fact, I’m sure higher stats would make it easier to play as well. A lot of difficulty for playing instruments came with coordinating your hands and eyes, getting your fingers to do exactly what you were reading on the sheets, so with higher dexterity it should become easier in the future to play more complicated arrangements.
‘I’m getting distracted, focus Alex.’ If I kept having monologues about these classes I was gonna be stuck here all day, the sooner I picked my classes the better. I focused to see if I could make the list be organized by combat oriented classes, and sure enough the list shifted around revealing my selection of classes.
New
‘I’m getting distracted, focus Alex.’ There were tons of classes being offered, tons being locked behind prerequisites, like [Chemist] I had to go through [Scientist] to get to. Plenty of options existed out there, and all of them had plenty of pro’s and cons going for them. And if this had been the world I’d been born in I might’ve been interested in a lot of them depending on my family, or if I was still living on Earth I might have chosen a music based class to represent my passions. But now that I was here? I wanted pure, raw, combat potential. Plain and simple. As such I focused my attention to filter the list to only show the classes I was interested in trying to pick and also filtered out the ones I technically didn’t qualify for. I wasn’t interested in drooling over things like a dragon slaying class that I had to be level 500 for and had killed 6 dragons or something. I couldn’t do that right now, and probably not anytime soon either. So no point in getting myself excited for something years in the future.
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CHAPTER 20
Updated Penny’s identify to display race.
CHAPTER 48/54
Fixing pop count error, I specified a total amount for the kingdom back in 48 and randomly decided to change my mind in 54 :3 changing total to represent the second number. I like the higher number more.
Chapter 54 paragraph in question
I had initially thought it housed around a couple million people at most, but it was actually nearly ten million people. Just in the capital alone. In fact, Vinwood was the odd city out being the only ‘major’ city that had under one million in population. All the others were sporting a couple million citizens at the bare minimum.
Chapter 48
The Seltas Kingdom wasn’t the largest nation by far, but it wasn’t small either. It had a total population of around 5 million people, most of which congregated here in the capital. Roughly three million people lived here. It could easily kill plenty of people here with how tightly packed the city was.
New
The Seltas Kingdom wasn’t the largest nation by far, but it wasn’t small either. It had a total population of at least 5 million people, most of which congregated here in the capital. I wasn’t entirely sure on that number since I hadn’t actually gotten a chance to explore everything and I wasn't the best at guesstimates. I’m sure someone could inform me better though. It could easily kill plenty of people here with how tightly packed the city was.
CHAPTER 25
Changed a single instance of Penny to Karif to uphold continuity
CHAPTER 24
Fixed a time continuity error
New
“Hell they could already know you guys are here, we didn’t find out about it until last night ourselves. They could be monitoring this whole situation right now and amassing a counter force to come ambush you.” I interjected.
CHAPTER 39
Removed an instance of mana sense leveling.
CHAPTER 52
Removed an instance of accelerated thoughts leveling
CHAPTER 53
updated this to describe what the skill actually does
[Skill Combination: Rose of the New Queen]
Ashendra threw her hand down with all of her might, the enormous icicle following her motions.
Ashendra was confident that if this attack connected, it would do considerable damage. The Lance would pierce through its body and then from the inside it was sprout thorns inside the body and begin sucking mana to then cause the end of the lance to bloom like a flower. The flower top and the thorns is what lent to the image of it being a rose. Something with lots of natural beauty, but could hurt the holder if you weren't careful. Perhaps, if she was lucky, even enough to kill.
Thanks to everyone that pointed stuff out, I really appreciate it!