Greetings readers,

Due to me realizing many certain failings of mine, I have temporarily ceased writing this fiction and will not be working on it in the near future. I have instead embarked on a different journey with another fiction that I am currently working on, Divine (https://royalroadl.com/fiction/13359/divine). Hopefully as I experience the process of creating Divine I will resolve the writing issues that I have found with this fiction and I will be able to start working on it once more as I do hope to actually complete this fiction. If you happened to like this fiction then perhaps you will also enjoy Divine, so please feel free to check it out!

This story has been stolen from Royal Road. If you read it on Amazon, please report it

As for those readers who wish to aid me in my journey as a writer, I would greatly appreciate it if you would analyze this fiction and post a constructive review on it, if you have time. What did you like or dislike about this fiction so far? How was my grammar and spelling? Did any elements of my writing itself rather than the story's plot irk you when it was read? Is my plot, or rather what I have revealed of my plot, so far lacking and if so how do you think I should address this issue? Generally speaking, how do you think I can improve as a writer?

Yours truly, The Void