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Remnant of a Sun: Tale Of An Exoraven
Chapter 1: Dying Breath of Laststar, A Shadowy Bargain

Chapter 1: Dying Breath of Laststar, A Shadowy Bargain

A biting wind howled across the desolate Northward, whipping the rickety airship, "Iron Sparrow," with icy fury. Inside, four figures huddled together for warmth, their breath misting the frigid cabin air.

Brieg Kresge, a young man with calloused hands and grease-stained overalls, tinkered with a dented control panel. His brow furrowed in concentration, nimble fingers dancing across wires. Unlike other Laststar children who dreamt of becoming priests or hunters, Brieg's passion lay in the whirring gears and rhythmic clang of the blacksmith's forge. Raised by a blacksmith father and an engineer mother, Brieg's natural talent was met with childhood taunts and isolation. However, this isolation fueled his fascination, leading him to dream of the prestigious Chancellorly Academy and a future spent inventing marvels. Now, conscripted into the harsh Exoraven program, Brieg felt his dreams crushed, the spark of ingenuity threatened by the harsh realities of their mission.

Across from him sat Gustav Jörn Spörl, a hulking veteran with a weathered face etched with the memories of a hundred battles. His scarred hands clutched a well-worn PMM-22 Rifle, a weapon more familiar than any mug of ale. Gustav's past was a world away from Brieg's sheltered village life. Torn from his family in Glecia, a war-torn land, he was molded into a soldier, forced to confront the horrors of battle. A single mission gone wrong led him to be presumed dead. But fate had other plans. He slipped into Laststar, seeking refuge. Years of hunting Strays and other outcasts as a mercenary hardened him, yet a flicker of gentleness remained, a buried ember waiting to be rekindled.

Lucienne Erik, a young woman with eyes that sparkled like fire, shivered despite the layers of worn leather she wore. A scholar with an unwavering fascination with fire, some deemed it pyromania. While others saw destruction, Lucienne saw beauty and potential. With her parents' unwavering support, she excelled in the Art of Flame, an ancient discipline manipulating fire itself. But her wisdom lacked the harsh realities of the Northward. Raised in comfort, she was a delicate flower about to be transplanted into the unforgiving desert. Her backpack bulged with weighty tomes chronicling the Art of Flame, the knowledge needed to keep the city of Colossus, and possibly humanity itself, from succumbing to the eternal freeze.

Lastly, there was Vandil Polski, a street-rat with a sly grin and a mischievous glint in his eyes. His nimble fingers, as skilled as Brieg's, were hidden beneath a tattered cloak. While Brieg tinkered for the good of the mission, Vandil's tinkering often involved picking pockets or disarming traps. Born to two addicts, he witnessed a darkness no child should ever face. When one murdered the other, Vandil was left alone, forced to survive by his wits and nimble fingers on the harsh Laststar streets. Joining gangs and resorting to stealing, morality became a luxury he couldn't afford. He harbored a dark secret, a past he desperately wanted to escape. The Exoraven recruitment offered a chance to start anew, but the scars of survival ran deep.

A low rumble from Gustav's throat broke the tense silence. "How much longer, Brieg?"

Brieg grimaced. "Fuel gauge is flickering, Gustav. Not looking good." The Iron Sparrow coughed and sputtered like a dying beast. A wave of collective dread washed over the group. Without fuel, they wouldn't just be stranded – they would become frozen tombstones in the Northward's unforgiving embrace.

Suddenly, Lucienne's eyes widened as she peered through a frost-encrusted window. "Look!" she gasped, pointing with a gloved finger.

On the horizon, a shimmering speck broke the monotony of the desolate landscape. As the Iron Sparrow sputtered closer, the speck resolved itself into a colossal city, its spires piercing the gloom. Colossus, the Laststar government's last bastion against the freeze. Relief and apprehension warred within them. Home, but potentially a home with empty promises.

Their descent through the biting air was a tense ballet. The Iron Sparrow shuddered with each cough of its sputtering engine, the skeletal remains of buildings on the outskirts of Colossus growing closer with agonizing slowness. Finally, with a jarring clang, the airship kissed the cracked pavement, sending a jolt through the occupants.

Brieg, his heart pounding a frantic rhythm against his ribs, unbuckled himself and clambered out. The frigid air stole the breath from his lungs, a stark contrast to the stale, oil-scented cabin. He glanced around at the desolate scene. Colossus, once a city of gleaming metal and bustling activity, was now a skeletal shell. Wind howled through empty streets, whipping dust devils around crumbling skyscrapers.

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The other team members emerged, their faces grim as they surveyed the scene. Gustav hefted his rifle, a seasoned soldier assessing the threat of the ruins. Lucienne clutched her backpack tighter, her eyes wide with a mix of awe and fear. Vandil, his usual flippant attitude replaced by a guarded silence, scanned their surroundings with a practiced eye.

A lone figure emerged from the shadows of a collapsed building. Clad in a long weathered robe, her face etched with the wisdom of many winters, as she approached with a measured gait. Elder Anya, a leader of the Laststar capital, her eyes held a flicker of recognition as she met Brieg's gaze.

"Exoravens," she rasped, her voice a brittle whisper against the howling wind. "You have arrived at a critical hour."

Anya led them into a grand building, of what might have been a government office in its prime before the Reclamation. Inside though, flickering torches revealed a war room, maps and charts covering the cracked walls.

"The Furnace," Anya began, gesturing to a map depicting a colossal structure at the city's heart, "sputters on its last embers. Without a specific artifact, the Ancestral Core, the city's defenses will crumble before the next winter to the Frost.”

She explained that the Core, a legendary device capable of harnessing the Northward's own energy to power the Furnace, was lost years ago. However, recent reports indicated the existence of fragmented texts mentioning its location.

"These texts," Anya pointed to a pile of brittle parchments on a table, "mention a hidden temple deep within the Whispering Canyons, east of the city. Legend speaks of an artifact hidden within its depths. Whether it's the Ancestral Core or not, it might hold a clue to its whereabouts."

Brieg felt a spark of hope flicker within him. Repairing things, solving puzzles – that was his forte. This quest was more than just salvaging a relic; it meant saving his home, his people. He looked around at his team. Gustav's face remained stoic, yet a glint of determination shone in his eyes. Lucienne, her voice trembling slightly, expressed her desire to analyze the texts. Even Vandil seemed intrigued, a calculating look in his eye.

"It's a dangerous journey," Anya warned, her gaze sweeping across the team. "The Whispering Canyons are rumored to be haunted by spectral guardians and patrolled by vicious scavengers. But you are one of Colossus' last hopes."

Brieg, a young mechanic thrust into a role far greater than he imagined, looked down at his grease-stained hands. He wasn't a soldier or a scholar, but he knew a thing or two about fixing broken things. And right now, Colossus is broken.

With a deep breath, Brieg met Anya's gaze, a newfound resolve hardening his features. "We'll find it," he declared, his voice ringing with quiet determination.

As Brieg spoke his declaration, a heavy silence descended upon the room. Suddenly, a shadowy figure emerged from the darkness of a corner. He wore ragged clothes and a hooded cloak, his face obscured by shadow.

"Exoravens," the figure rasped, his voice gravelly and laced with a strange rasp. "I’ve been to The Whispering Canyons… a treacherous place, filled with secrets and dangers."

Brieg narrowed his eyes, suspicion prickling at his skin. "Who are you?" he demanded.

The figure stepped forward, a sliver of moonlight glinting off a single, piercing blue eye. "A guide," he said, his voice dropping to a conspiratorial whisper. "One who knows the Canyons like the back of his hand. For a price, I can lead you to the hidden temple, faster than your rickety airship ever could."

Lucienne, ever the scholar, eyed the figure with caution. "How can we trust you?" she questioned.

The figure chuckled, a dry, humorless sound. "Trust? In these desperate times, trust is a luxury few can afford. But consider this – I offer a quicker path to the Core, and time, as I understand it, is of the essence."

Gustav, ever the pragmatist, stroked his beard thoughtfully. "What is your price?" he asked, his voice gruff.

The figure's smile, if it could be called that, stretched into a chilling grin. "A mere trinket," he replied, his voice taking on a sinister edge. "Something you might have scavenged on your travels… a small, ornately carved compass, perhaps?"

A cold dread washed over Brieg. The compass – the only memento he had of his late mother, an engineer who instilled in him a love for mechanics. It held no real value, but to Brieg, it was a cherished possession.

The other team members exchanged uneasy glances. This wasn't a simple request for payment; it felt like a test, a challenge to their resolve. The tense silence filled the room, broken only by the howling wind outside.