Author notes:
First of all I'm ecstatic at seeing over 1k views. More so seeing 61 followers and 10 favs..:) Thank you to all followers and viewers. Made me excited to write.
I hope i can write up to your guy's expectations and make the story interesting and easy to follow.
I am new at writing so i will try my best to deliver
Some mistakes, will come back and edit along with chapter one.
On that note looking for a proofreader.
Hope you enjoy, sorry for the long Author note and the rant following.
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Chapter Two: Subject A
It’s been nearly a day since I was given to the ultra hot succubus. The trip was long and boring as I am stuck inside this coffin box. During one of her conversations with an unknown male companion I found out her name is Gwen Apollon Starfall. Apparently it’s a big deal to have a surname here as the male companion asked if she was a noble.
During the night I was disappointed when she didn’t use me. I think it was night as i heard the sound of logs crackling and popping from what i presume was fire.
“Finally here!” Gwen Cheerfully exclaims
The box I am currently in feels once again like its floating.
Interesting she can use magic as well. I wonder if it’s a common thing here.
Floating I hear Gwen the succubus give her thanks.
After awhile of floating I hear doors open, along with a rush of cold air. Which after being cramped in this hot ass box, is a very nice feeling.
We are most likely in the so called school now. As I hear people greeting Gwen as Ms. Starfall.
Finally I stopped moving and now am propped up.
*creak*
Within a blink of an eye the box that surrounded me was gone. I now stood facing a large room filled with medium sized wooden desks along with chairs assembled in rows like a typical classroom. Not anything like the typical modern classrooms on earth though.
If anything it looks like an old timely classroom that the Amish use. Out of the corner of my eye I see Gwen, I mean Ms. Starfall as I am now in school. Laying some papers on the huge wooden desk that has a comfortable looking chair.
Opening a shelf in the desk she grabs what seems to be a large red silk looking cloth. Heading towards me she throws it over me, completely covering me and blocking my view.
A few minutes pass, when a sound of a door opening followed by sounds of people walking on hardwood with shoes. I can barely make out shapes but most of the ones I make out are that of women.
Most likely my classmates
After awhile the sounds of walking and people sliding chairs against hardwood comes to an end.
“Good morning class, Welcome to sex101 I’m your teacher Ms.Starfall
WHAT? I THOUGHT I WOULD BE USED FOR BIOLOGY NOT THIS!!
WHAT THE FUCK KIND OF SCHOOL IS THIS?
“As you may know we succubus live off of life energy. So knowing how to seduce a male to extract life energy is essential. Some of you may know but life energy is our very soul without it, we would be like rocks or furniture. With us being succubus we are born with a very low amount.”
Ms. Starfall continues lecturing I tune out mostly.
After about an hour’s long explanation of life energy. I tune back in hoping to hear some information about this world.
“Now as you may all know with the treaty with the human kingdom Faust. We are forbidden from using live test subject”
Boos fill the classroom
“Yes I share your disappointment, but we do have a substitute”
A gust of wind throws the red cloth covering me off allowing me to see my classmates.
NOSEBLEED
I am greeted with a feast for the eyes. D CUPS, E CUPS along with beautiful faces and curvy bodies attached seated in wooden desks. Not a plain one in sight. They most definitely look like succubuses pale skin, S&M type revealing clothing; most have black hair and black wings. All look like they are in their late 20s. Looking over at Ms. Starlite she is a rarity with snow white skin, white hair and white devil wings.
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Maybe she’s an Albino?
I don’t care
I plan to make her Mrs. Holland even if I’m a doll!
“You will all soon be going out to different countries, so knowing the male body is important as getting their life energy is a must or you will die”
Saying that she walks towards me
“Subject A, A human male, most males are stupid especially the humans”
HEY!!
“They are easily seduced, especially if they are virgins from big breasts. So make sure to highlight and puff out your chest to turn them on”
The whole class is looking at me; after Ms. Starfall is done lecturing they begin taking notes.
DON’T FREAKING TAKE NOTES!!
“Now this is where life energy comes from”
With a sudden movement her right hand grabs my..
The sugar rush feeling again along with a wave of pleasure shoots through my body.
MY MINDS GOING BLANK
*DING*
A loud sounding bell rings pulling my mind back.
“Ah looks like class is over, Tomorrow we will get into techniques at pleasuring the human body.”
Some of the women in the class let out disappointed awes. Others silently complain with being the first class in years to not use live subjects. They give Ms. Starfall their thanks and head out of the classroom.
With the last girl leaving the classroom is now empty except for me and Ms. Starfall.
As she leaves the classroom she looks at her hand with a questioning look.
“That felt very lifelike”
I hear her mumble under her breath as she walks out of view.
Thus ending my first day of class getting the name Subject A in this new world.
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Rachel's POV
“Where is it?”
It’s been an hour my search throughout the house has not produced results. I now am looking for the last place it had been my mother’s wardrobe.
“Rachel what are you doing?”
My mother’s teasing voice pushes me over the edge
“WHERE DID YOU PUT IT? DON’T TELL ME YOU ACTUALLY BURNED IT?”
I yell at her, I feel bad about yelling but it’s important that I find it
“Relax I didn’t burn it, I gave it to some succubus woman”
My mouth drops
The anger fades away. I wish now she would have burned it.
“A girl your age shouldn’t have something that lewd anyways”
Saying that my mother leaves
I now am drenched in sweat.
If they find out I made it with forbidden magic…
My mind plays the scenes of what bad outcomes await me.
“I have to get it back!!”
Author Rant:
Going to explain a few things
I know you guys wanted him to move and stuff. Give me time its a work in progress he will be moving around in due time.
He's basically playing the part atm, I know for one i would as well. If people saw a doll moving and talking they would probably try to kill it.
his and my thoughts
The class is basically seduction in the wild. (if you have a better name then sex101 suggest it/ as i came up with a lot but they were too long so kept it short)
The succubi get life energy from slaves mostly, that they have in their country
Kind of kicking myself for not using third person could have shown more stuff and explained more than just Chris’s pov. But I wanted you to see his reactions to things. Who knows if I finish story may do it all over again in third. No worries though not gonna do a rewrite. Going to finish the story even if it kills me. :)
Ps: if you want me to write detail page about the world plus do a character sheet let me know, as I plan Mc to not stay in school forever.
Feedback on chapter much appreciated. even if its negative will only motivate me to try to make my writing better.