I’m gonna drop this story for awhile and restart. And before people start getting mad at me I have a valid reason especially if you’re an author: my reason is, for the most part, the time control ability. Now for those who read my work and somehow don’t know, Finn has a time control ability and I left this to my readers to decide but while discussing about the best way to nerf it so it’s still strong but not op, I found out that it’s really hard to write a serious story with time control in it. So I’m doing away with it and to do that I have to scrap the story which has a bunch of other problems that I can fix now so forgive me those who like my story but I’m going to think about an ability that’s easier to write about and learn more about the rwby series.
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