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Volume 1 Chapter 5: Unusual Girl

I’m feeling a little bit scared right now… It feels like I could destroy/damage the world with just a simple action.

What would happen if I sneeze? Will it create an epidemic that could wipe out all life in Veran?

Me: “No good… I’m starting to feel depress…”

I shook my head when I noticed that my current train of thought was going towards somewhere dark. I decided to ignore my luck and continue inspecting my stats.

. . . . .

I spent a good amount of time reading and understanding all of my special abilities.

Calm mind is the ability to stabilize my way of thinking and emotions that would usually make me panic.

Childish nature is kind of odd, its description was "You have a childish nature" but it had two useful branch skills;

Weak Presence is the ability to make me unnoticeable while Concealment is the ability to change what my status shows.

Natural Talent is the ability to learn something without too much effort.

Self-Sacrifice is the ability to sacrifice something important to achieve my goals...

Special Abilities shows my actions/personality/attitude back on earth.

Childish Nature reflects my attitude when I play around.  People wouldn't usually notice me as I like an invisible man. I would sometimes belittle myself to avoid being arrogant and over confident.

I'm always calm... that's what my friends say, but I usually hide my emotion with my expressionless face and be more ignorant of the situation, I tend to think more when I do this though.

I would usually learn much more quickly if the subject interests me, but it has its demerits though, as I'm having trouble with stuff I don't particularly have interest in.

I did sacrifice some stuff important to me... but I can't remember anything... I wonder why....

Those were all of my understanding...

I wish there was a book though, it's much better if there are guidelines.

. . . . .

I decided to stop over thinking for now as It was starting to get boring.

I began playing around with my affinity and try myself at magic. If you're in a different world with magic and you came from a world without magic, it would be impossible not be curious and interested!

I was able to form different stuff, intentionally or unintentionally!

Fire ball, Water ball, Earth Sphere, Wind Sphere, Holy lance, Unholy lance, etc. basically random stuff as it was fun!

I was able to acquire some nifty skills too!

System:You have acquired the following skills:

Fire Magic Manipulation

Water Magic Manipulation

Earth Magic Manipulation

Wind Magic Manipulation

Light Magic Manipulation

Dark Magic Manipulation

Conjuring

Using magic became a little bit easier after acquiring the new skills, it's quite convenient!

I continue to play around~

. . . . .

I continued playing with magic for what it felt like an hour had passed.

That girl “Feruniru” suddenly comes into the room while carrying different kinds of fruits and water.

Now that she’s standing quite far from me, I had a better look at her.

She looks like she’s in her teens, maybe 17 years old?

She has a long black hair that reaches all the way to her waist, her hair slightly blocks her beautiful face. A pair of mysterious blue eyes that is intently stares at me. Fair white skin coupled with a well shaped body, wearing a blue open jacket over a simple black dress with a white belt.

There’s something enthralling about her… but I can’t really say what though…

She slowly walks up to me and hands me some fruits and a cup of water.

Looking at her more closely, I noticed that her previous pale complexion is all but gone, her eyes seemed much brighter than yesterday’s soulless eyes.

Me: “..Uh …Thanks”

I rechecked her status while I accept the food she’s giving me.

Status WindowName:FeruniruClass:???Level:1Race:HumanGenderFemaleHealth460/460     (1.7/s)Mana380/380     (1.9/s)Strength:17Vitality:26Agility:19Intelligence:28Endurance:23Luck:15Remaining Stat Point:0

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Social StatusEquipped Title:HomunculusFaction:NoneAlignment:Neutral

AffinityFire:16.58%Water:20.03%Earth:14.74%Wind:17.40%Light:80.49%Dark:10.89%

Skills: Passive Skills:Skill lvl Active skills: Skill lvl Special Abilities: Skill lvl Charm Aura

Loyalty

Natural Talentlvl.3

lvl.8

lvl.4 Remaining Skill Points: 10

Status Effect EffectTimeIncubation

Life-Line

Regeneration34:42:14

34:42:14

99:99:99

There’s a few changes now…

Her race changed to human from ???, she’s now a homunculus instead of the soulless doll, parameters changed differently depending on her growth, and she gained a new special ability called Charm Aura

Wait… is it this skill the cause of the weird feeling? guess not.

I still have a weird feeling towards this girl… I don’t know why. She does look and feel familiar, did I met her somewhere?

Maybe I’ll get some answers after the effects of Self-Sacrifice is gone. Hopefully~

Me: “By the way… uh… Feruniru, where did you get this?”

The girl slightly tilts her head to the side before pointing towards the window.

I looked outside the window and stopped an abnormal looking tree.

Me: “Oh yea… I forgot about creating that.”

It feels like I’m forgetting too many things… I’ll just blame it on Weakened and Self-Sacrifice.

I tried talking a bit more to Feruniru.

. . . . .

I spent a good amount of time trying to talk to Feruniru…

Though it felt like an interrogation instead of a conversation as she could only answer yes or no through the movement of her head.

It didn’t felt like she hated it though, I think she was happy as she would sometimes smile when I tell her some stories.

It did felt like she was a kid… maybe ages 3~5?

Me: *Yawn* “It’s getting pretty dark outside and I’m getting tired, I guess it’s time for sleep~”

Feruniru nodded her head agreeing that it’s time for sleep.

Me: “There’s another bed in the next room, you could sleep there. Goodnight~”

Even though I said that, Feruniru never moved. Her face is that of a person pleading for something while clutching my blanket with her right hand.

.......Don’t tell me!

Me: “…D-D you want to sleep with me?”

She nodded multiple times this time…

No matter how much of a kid your mental state is in right now, your body isn't! This is too much for me!

Me: “C-Can’t you just sleep at the next room?”

She shook her head vigorously, there are even tears in her eyes…

Me: “Ok! Fine! You can sleep with me but-“

Before I could finish my sentence, she quickly dove into bed and proceeded to hug me… I-It hurts!

Her action really resembles a child’s… I’m feeling a bit happy though, so I’ll just ignore it this time.

. . . . .

I woke up the next day still feeling a little bit tired… I ‘had’ a bit of trouble sleeping yesterday… It was painful…

I only have 8 more hours to go until my status effects are gone.

Feruniru already woke up earlier than me, I think she’s out on the yard playing around.

I’m also curious about her Incubation and Life-Line.

I can’t inspect other’s skills, status effects, and title description.

I think I’ll just waste my time walking around and relax…

I already did everything I could think off yesterday. I’ll just wait for 13 hours then head to the Kingdom.

My original plan of going into the Kingdom was delayed for 3 days…

But today, I might be able to go today~

I’ll leave Feruniru here for now, I need to check if the Kingdom is safe.

I’ll just buy her something later~

I spent the day walking and playing around my dominion.

Just a little more and I can say bye-bye status effects~

I notice Feruniru walking towards me.

I was about to greet her but the atmosphere around her stopped me.

It wasn’t like her usual childish/playful atmosphere… it was something else, I can’t describe it…

Me: “J-Just what is this feeling?”

I softly muttered to myself as this ‘certain’ feeling is going all throughout my body…

Before I noticed it, Feruniru was already in front of me.

She raised her right hand and placed it on my chest.

She looks straight at my eyes and gave a bright smile that matches her beautiful face.

She was saying something but I couldn’t hear it…

System:The following status effects have dissipated:

Self-Sacrifice

Weakened

My consciousness fades and my vision turned to black.