----------- Cocoyasi Villager------------- luffy age 15-------------
"captain! captain! oiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!" a desprate marine screamed, running towards the room of his captain. no one bother to stop him as he pushes the door open revealing a mouse-like man standing impateintly.
tapping his toe, Nezumi was not pleased at the sight before him. " WHAT!? well? SPEAK!"" he wanted so badly to just go back to counting his golds..
the poor marine immeaditly salutes and reported " a marine warship is currently heading this way sir!" he gulps " it should be docking any time soon sir!"
"HHUUUUUUHHHHHHHHH?? why didnt you say so! man! hurry and stand line!" nezumi quickly hides the gold coins as best as he could " get to it! we most proberly meet the marines in the ship" he ordered with haste leaving the reporter to think to himself i was saying so..
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docking into the base wasnt a hasle as many marines came aboard, helping me doing so. of course, they were surprise by the number or rather lack of marines in the ship.
what looks like a mouse wearing a captains coat was urgently walking down towards me with some men directly behind him. he stopped infront of me with a awkward face " how should i address you sir? oh right! my name is Nezumi current captain of this base" he said rather proudly of his rank.
"Ryu..." after some thinking i continued " or vice admiral, it is up to you Nez" if possible, he stood even straighter then before a... vice admiral!? sweat began dripping from his forehead " uh hu Ry- Vice admrial sir!" he stuttered from fear " if i may, for what are you here? he asked.
i merely gave a glace and answered " look after the ship properly, i will be back after taking a look into the village " i order and began walking away towards the village holding a small boat with a single sail above my head. the cool breeze blew coat, flapping it and giving me a heroic exit.
so young yet... wait hes going to that village! i most escape at once! thought a gloomy nezumi.
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reaching Cocoyasi Village did not take long from the base. the village was a simple one with simple houses, simple roads, and simple misery... the people walking the roads were not impress by my coat. they gave a glance and left there after. i did not bother them and continued my way towards what i have planned since entering this world.
finally, a grove of oranges apeared to the left of the end of the village. i wonder... would nami be present? mhum no matter, if she is then i will recruit her aswell. i thought to myself while knocking on the door of what i asummed to be nojiko house.
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i was proven right once the door was opened by a blue haired lady with a relatively nice looking body and face. i could tell she wanted nothing more than to slam the door but she opted not to " what do you need" she asked without the respect one would have for vice admiral.
"it is best we speak about this inside" i replied. noticing she wont allow such a thing, i continued " this is about the park by the village" and grap the bounty paper of arlong from my pockets, showing it to her.
her face darken even more but allowed me to enter and sat my onto a sofa. she sat directly infront of my with crossed arms "well?" she looked annoyed to say the least.
"my name is Ryu, a vice admiral of the marines" i began and pull out a map from my pockets, spreading across the table in front of us. she restrained her shocked face and looks at the map
" i've heard of a talented navigator around here and believe it to be you.. agree to take me to that place and i will take care of Arlong while also taking care of the incompetent marines based nearby" i finished. my i interwined my fingers and placed my chin onto it while looking expectively.
she began formulatng plots inside her mind and questioned " as a marine, arent you suppose to capture pirates like arlong?"
"and?"
after another good minute of thinking she signs and accepts
"leave a letter and pack up, i will be back in 20 minutes" i said confidently. she seemed to accept the power of my rank and proceeds to do so.
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SPOILERSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS CHAPTER IS DONE YOU DONT HAVE TO READ THE NEXT FEW SENTENCES
and stop. hello, this is ShadedLight speaking, for this chapter, i was going to write from this point to sky island then obtain goro goro no mi. then go to amazon lily then set up a lab for devil fruits which i will then speak to you guys my thoughts on devil fruit and how they work including the rant i was suppose to add in. next chap would contain 2 time skip. first 1 year- he takes admiral test. second to when luffy lands on the island. and yes, info gain by lab will be kept as a mystery. this would effectively bring the story into the marineford war. now heres the problem, the pace. X.X QQ T-T and all kinds of sad emojis. i honestly came up with this story by witnessing garp punch the shit outa marco and sitting on the admiral seat like a badass. i image myself sitting on a seat nearby and added powers to myself as time went by with my imagination. i did not think of a start nor a end. just where i sit there with people looking shock and my powers of the roof. i then thought of the womens i would have but not how i got them. so heres my question. do i just continue on with the pace and stop after marineford efectively making this a short story ( should be finished in 2-4 more proper chapters at this pace) or what?
i can of course slow down, not stop after the war, and ect.. but how? how do i slow down when the plot is me getting from 1 island to the next? i can add interactions and stuff but im not good with them. i can introduce a random stop at a random island but that would be filler. Q-q my pace so fast im like the usain bolt of fanfictions. anyways plz put down your suggestions and thanks!
ps; sorry for the incomplete chapters- its a lot harder connecting what i image of the future to what i am writing right now then i thought it would be.
pss; i realise i could have added the fishermens reaction to the warship like i did for the marine and could also extend on the interaction between Ryu and nojiko, might come back later to day to make this chapter at least close to 2k words.
psss; i forgot what i wanted to say for this one while writing the pss one... huhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh