So yes, as the chapter name says, the second draft has started! It is a re-write of the story, so I felt it deserved it's own spot. You can find the second draft here: https://royalroadl.com/fiction/15516/one-mans-journey-2nd-draft

The narrative has been stolen; if detected on Amazon, report the infringement.

Take a looksy and let me know what you think ^_^

And then it looks like to post this, this body needs to be at least 500 characters long so this is all just me rambling to reach that point ^_^