Childhood Arc:

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Training Arc:

Prologue: Writing (150%) Editor (0%) Proofread (0%)

Kiryun Arc:

So it has come to my attention a few weeks ago, that my story has severe problems. Mainly that there is a lack of a plot or goal and even feeling in my characters. So I will be taking the next few weeks to go over and rewrite the story. Some things that I expect to change is...

Childhood/Training arc:

* Since I wrote that Michael's family lives in a big house, I feel that there's a need to have some maids. Mainly to take care of the house. Only 3 but they will be making some casual appearances in the story.

* Michael needs more scenes so I'll be writing about his interactions more. Especially with Liera.

* Removing the Time Skip and actually writing about the training. This means I will be giving him new stats as well.

* More information about the continent of Gaia. I was about to write about nobles in Chapter 18 but it was incredibly awkward and I think it would be better to put all the information I need into the Childhood arc and Side Stories.

* Introducing a new cast of SS characters. Players whose names I have taken from chat. Only in the last SS of the arc.

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* Better curse. People don't like the halved stats so I'll be changing it a bit.

* Michael will be going through some internal problems as well. Well, more mental than internal bodily problems.

Travel and Kiryun Arc:

* So a big problem about this arc was the various descriptions I give out and the lack of action. I will move most of the descriptions to either the childhood arc or to SS.

* Actions. I will be describing fights in greater detail.

* Liera. She and Michael will be talking alot more. She will get more screen time as well.

* Jemma. Some scenes from her POV will be added.

* Lerisa. More of an antagonistic role in the story. Like that gag villain. More backstory too.

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If you want to apply, please email [email protected] although I really doubt people will >.>

Questions and concerns and even some suggestions? Please comment below or email.

Also review my fic so I can see what the problem is. AND RATE!!! This has been a blatant advertisement from Argos. Even though I'll ask for a score reset later >.>

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