After finishing chapter six I began to think about where i want my novel to go and the things I want to do. I then relised that there where a few plot holes and also... well I needed far more description and flavor added to my writting. Other wise it was just a spew of information rather than an interesting read.
This is my first novel so I will be taking some liberties with it and redoing it from time to time, but I know not to go over board because that will be unfair to you guys. For this weak and next weak I will be redoing all the chapter I have put out so far. I have already finished my prologue so feel free to go look that over. Luckily my chapters are very short but I relise that's no excuse.
I think I'll also take this time to talk about my self a little though there isn't much to talk about. First and foremost, I come from a religous back ground as you may notice I try to keep my writting as graphically clean as possible (You wont see any strong language or graphical depictions of gore/blood/nudity/ect.). I am also single *wink* *wink*, work at walmart (I'm sorry om) and love teaching children and playing video games. Yeah those two deffinetly go togeather so just role will it. >.<
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I started this light novel merely on a wim. There is another reason though and that is, well, I'm a day dreamer. I stand around and think for hours about different stories and possibilities of stories that I read or watched. This is especially bad when it comes to animated films that could have multiple endings or encounters. This is a terrible habit of mine, but I find enjoyment out of it. My parents and sibilings get extremely annoyed at me when they see me pacing back and forth doing nothing. Its a bad habit that I pace around when I start thinking about one of my stories.
I figured since I spend so much time day dreaming I might as well share a bit of that with you guys. Though I say that, turning my day dreams into a novel that can be read is more difficult than I expected. Thanks for reading this far and I hope we can have a fun journey togeather from now on as well.