I would like to tell anybody who read the last chapter that I added on a few extra paragraphs to finish up the last chapter instead of attempting a cliff hanger. Since Im here I figure Ill add in all the extra characters with some shameless begging for some reviews. If not reviews maybe some comments giving any suggestions. Once again any suggestions or ideas you think could advance the story or something youd simply like to see. I need more characters. I need more characters. I need more characters. I need more characters. I need more characters. I need more characters.

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