As you can see by the title I have spent the last few days editing the first twenty three chapters of my novel to make the chapters a bit more bear able to read. I actually underestimated the difficulty of fixing the chapters so I will admit that despit them being a bit easier to read they still wont likely be that good, but if you want to re-read them and give some feed back that would be much appreciated. Entirely up to you readers though, should you decide to give some feed back I will likely not respond for a few hours as I am going to attempt getting some musch needed sleep, so good night, good luck, and please have a good life.

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