Sooo, actually i didn't want to post this chapter so soon, mainly because i haven't looked over it as much as i did for chapter 1 ,so i'm a bit insecure about it...
Whatever, i still wanted to give you (whoever you are) a real chapter, as the first was more like a prologue and didnt have much'action'.
I hope you enjoy it, but keep in mind that this story will not have so much action (like boss-fights ect. so soon),as i still need some time to build the story in a way that a consistent story exists.
By the way, i noticed that this chapter looks shorter than the first, but i counted the words and they were both roughly at 1320 words. I know that some of the writers here manage to write much more and upload, like everyday, but i am just not able to write longer chapters without letting you wait for ...a month or something? So i would like you to understand it if i wont post here for a long time.
Also i'm really exited to say that i have 2 Followers, which makes me incredibly happy!
Thank you for reading, and pleas comment if you see mistakes or have anything to say at all.
:-D
Edit:I changed a part of chapter 1 so that you can imagine her a bit better:
Ricky swiped a few times trough the air and two girls appeared In front of her. One was just like her, obviously a humæ, the other one had light green plantlike skin and a Slender build with light blue wings that were gently folded behind the back of the being that looked so much like her. She was much more beautiful and mesmerising than her humæ self which had the same build, but standing next to the Fétheren, it just looked boring and colourless. It had the same brown eyes and the also brown ponytail that went down onto her shoulders.
The Fétheren had rose coloured bangs and some blue-ish aspects and it was curled, so that the strands ended up a bit under her shoulder. Her eyes were coloured in a dark blue and the body of the 15 year-old girl was just like in reality. A pretty waistline, but not many curves. While she was looking at the two avatars, Ricky had continued to talk about something without noticing that she didn't listen anymore.
(this is just for those who dont want to go back to the first chapter)
Chapter 2 - New Title?
After she regained her senses She tried to stand up and noticed that She wore a brown shorts and a dark green shirt which looked really ragged and tattered.Also, Falyoras skin was light green and one could see the ends of the leaves on her joints. She got exited and wanted to see her wings, but she didn't have a mirror and also didn't know how to move ones wings.
' I'll just imagine it the easiest way I can, Afterall this is a game and not reality '
Then she concentrated on her back and tried to feel the spots where her wings were connected with her body, and as she thought she could feel something. she tried to imagine slowly moving these spots up and down( Afterall she didn't want to fly too high).
Suddenly Falyora didn't feel the floor anymore and realised that She was already flying! Excitedly She started to imagine moving her wings a bit faster and actually rose up into the air. Now She tried to change the direction which was pretty difficult, but after many unsuccessful attempts which resulted in her falling down so much that her pants that were previously coloured in a dark green had become as brown as the tshirt. After that she finally managed to move around- even if it clearly wasn't easy for her- After The girl calmed down, She noticed a small bar in her top left corner of view which moved with wherever her eyes went, always in the top left corner.
It said 'hp'there...
' Ah, I suppose that's my health points! ' Now that she looked around, She noticed,that there weren't any animals or people around. The girl was standing on a small opening surrounded by huge trees she couldn't possibly see trough.
Falyora remembered that in these games there was this thing called status, but as She had no idea how to open it, She just quietly said ' status ' and some kind of semi-transparent table which displayed:
FalyoraAge 15Level 1Race - FétherenTitle - n/aClass - n/aAffinity n/aHp 170 (vit x 10)Mp 100 (int x 10)Str 11Def 9Agi 13Int 10Wis 9Luk 9ResistanceLight 15%Dark 15%Fire 10%Water 10%Earth 10%Air 10%SkillsFlight Mastrery lv 1 beginner (12%)Call systemLog out
Slightly after She looked at the screen a new table popped up:
Turn notifications on?YesNo
She choose yes and was momentarily flooded with tables.
For using your body like you never have before, you have gained +2 strength
For flying very fast and being able to accelerate and decelerate you have gained +4 agility
For figuring out how to fly by yourself in a way nobody has ever tried, you have gained +1 intelligence
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There were so many! Most Were to inform her of the stat increases which really surprised the girl.
She thought gaining stats was really hard, but here She was, just playing around a bit and gaining so many stats!
After Falyora cleared away the stat notifications,she saw a big one, which seemed to be a notice directed at every new player:
Congratulations on starting your game, but be prepared,that things won't always be as you think them to be!
Pleas enjoy your time in here, especially because the time ratio of our new engine gives you even more time to play while managing to keep up with your real life. But please notice, that after you spend too much time inside the game, a safety mechanism will link you out forcefully to ensure your safety while playing. Please enjoy your time, and remember that 1 hour in real life is2 hours here. Have fun!
Falyora was surprised, she didn't think she could spent even more time inside the game.
As she swiped the big message away she thought she had read it all,but then she noticed a really small notice:
You have been awarded a title:Moonlight FærieIf you don't accept this title it will not show up in your status,
but if you accept it,you won't know what kind in effect it might have.Accept?YesNo
Without hesitation she said yes.
A new window opend up with a description of the title:
Moonlight FærieBecause of your beautiful and joyous actions you have been acknowledged by the færies of this forest.
they have taken a liking to you , so you get 10% resistance for every element and an additional 5% for light and dark even when this title isn't equipped.
If you equip this title, færies will be nice and polite to you.
This title grants you additional control over your wings. You can now use them to fight enemies.! This title may bring more rewards in the future as it is made in correspondence of your level !
Falyora was astonished by the many good things this title granted her.
She decided to thank the færies by flying around the trees in a way she thought of as gently and went to caress the flowers. Then she waved her hands to the trees and rose up into the air. While flying she thought about the mysterious title she was awarded with by the færies. It said she could use her wings to fight, but how? And who ?
Strangely, since falling down from the character creation she hadn't met any aggressive animals like goblins or other typical rpg monsters.
Shrugging slightly she decided not to think too much about the things she didn't know , but rather enjoy the scenery of the beautiful forest below, searching for a difference in the scene.
But even so, as she looked around , she didn't notice anything which looked different,there were only the big trees and small flowers on the ground.
she remembered that Ricky said she'd send her to a friend of hers, but how should she find him? ( she thought it should be a he, because of Ricky's personality, but she wasn't too sure herself).
Falyora sighed and started to fly around the forest.
She surely must have spent one hour at least , looking for a sign of life in this empty forest, always flying down and looking for holes in which could be a passage to a cave or up in the sky , looking for an abnormality in the scenery, until she discovered a cave, hidden under deep green bushes and trees.
It was located in the innermost part of the forest, was what she figured out, because the closer she came to the cave, the darker was the green of the leaves and the more eerie got the air.
'It really doesn't look as if visitors are welcome... Uwaa, I don't know what to do... Well, for now I'll just enter, standing around won't change anything.'
She thought to herself, after all she had indeed promised herself to be braver in the game, than she was in reality. So she thought that this would be a good time to start with it.
As she stepped into the cave , the loud sound of something tapping on stone could be heard. Scared of something coming up to get from behind like she had seen it in those horror movies, she had to turn around all the time to make sure nobody was sneaking up to her. Because of that, it took her some time before she realised that it was the sound of her own steps, and by that time she had nearly begun to cry because it was so scary.
She hit her cheeks with her hands and thought :
' Nothing has even happend, I shouldn't be scared anymore! There isn't anything scary here at all! '
At that moment she heard a small sound as well as a strange and eerie voice:
"Who are you and what do you want, entering my sacred grounds?"
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Thank you for reading and please comment/criiticise to make this story better.
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