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Comments, Suggestions, etc.

Hi ppl. I just started writing my first fan-fic.

If you're reading it - awesome!!!

I am open to suggestions, criticisms and thoughts at any time.

You might be reading a stolen copy. Visit Royal Road for the authentic version.

Feel free to hate. Not going to get any better if ppl dont tell me what im doing wrong. so:

The floor is yours!!!