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Prologue: a hero meeting with a child and he adopt him cause he want it
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Chapter 1:Must i go to school?
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Chapter 2:I don't understand why my dad fear my mom...
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Chapter 3:Is wyfern really that scary?
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Chapter 4:Team up?
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Chapter 5:This test is really a pain
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Chapter 6: What the hell i got a fiance!
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Chapter 7:Yeah you are strong ,happy now?
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Chapter 8: A fight between mother and my fiance is scary....
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Chapter 9:Meeting with shiroyuki!
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Chapter 10: Shiroyuki past and problems.
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Chapter 11:I wonder how this guy survive?
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Chapter 12:Is this it?
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Chapter 13:It is too late if you notice it now.
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Chapter 14:I won't forgive you.!!!!!
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Chapter 15:After battle.
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Chapter 16:A Fight between my mom and fiance Is a pain.
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Chapter 17:The fight between shiroyuki and Riese(start)
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Chapter 18:Shiroyuki and Riese fight.
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Chapter 19:Unknown dream.
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chapter 20:Them again
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Chapter 21:Homeroom teacher.
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Chapter 22:Loli Ninja!!!!!!'
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Chapter 23:You still lack a battle experience
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Chapter 24:Sorry ,i can't help you this time..
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Chapter 25:Shiroyuki Brother
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Chapter 26: Vs Julius
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Chapter 27:Brother don't run away yet.
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Chapter28:Shiroyuki,riesse and Miyuri vs mom (part 1)
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Chapter 29:Shiroyuki,Riese and miyuri vs Mom (last)
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Chapter 30:How to prevent crime?Easy just call my dad.
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Chapter 31:Another Problem of the month.
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Chapter 32:You better be her boyfriend or i will cut yours.
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Chapter 33:A hell? Yep i feel it now.......
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Chaptern 34:I want to smack my head to the wall.
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Chapter 35:Kidnapped ?Then i just need to make my out.
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This is not a chapter
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Chapter 36:Mom?Why you open your mouth like that ?
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Chapter 37::Don't you dare a waste a food
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Chapter 38:......An unexpected problems.
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Chapter 39:Peaceful morning
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Chapter 40:You overestimate me to much.
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Chapter 41: Are you an idiot?
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Chapter 42:Even you have thousand live ,i can easyly defeat you!
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Chapter 43:Problems solved,but new problems arise..
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Chapter 44:A simple wish of mad scientist.
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Chapter 45:Mad Scientist wish part 2
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Chapter 46:Mad Scientist Wish part 3
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Chapter 47:Sorry can't do that.
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Chapter 48:You aren't the same as other
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Chapter 49:Your real wish are...
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Chapter 50:I will do it for you..
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Chapter 51:I HATE YOU FATHER(Jessica)
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Chapter 52:The difference between powers.
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Chapter 53:Mysterios past
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Chapter 54:....A fight....
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Chapter 55:Do you think my house is hotel or something?
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Chapter 56:......I am not weak!
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Sorry again there is something to do
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Chapter 57:How to get wolf as pet.
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Chapter 58:Liese and riese
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Chapter 59:Now what we must search?
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Chapter 60:The Hell is wrong with this people brains
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Chapter 61:Holy Emperor, i have questions for you...
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Chapter 62:.....At home.......
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Chapter 63:I will let forvish know about your 'special' book
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Chapter 64:Vs Holy emperor part 1
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Chapter 65:Vs The Holy Emperor part 2
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Chapter 66:Vs The holy emperor(Riese dad) last
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Chapter 67:Cheater!
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Chapter 68:Peaceful week?Impossible!
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Chapter 69:Oni-chan(Miyuri)
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Chapter 70:This is for my family.
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Chapter 71:lunchtime =Suffering
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Chapter 72:I can't believe no one except you.
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Chapter 73:i don't care what she is!
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Chapter 74:Fox!
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Chapter 75:Preparation!
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Chapter 76:Kidness has a limit.
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Chapter 77:That's all?
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Chapter 78:Single swords is enough!
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Chapter 79:What I am doing all this time?
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Chapter 80:Sorry,i only understand human language.
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Chapter 81:So?Past is past you couldn't change it.
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Chapter 82:Aulia return.
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Chapter 83:No matter what,he is still my dad.
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Chapter 84:Forvish past(1)
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Chapter 85:Forvish past 2:Meeting with strange girl.
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Chapter 86:Forvish past(03):I am sorry...
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Chapter 87:Neechan,why?
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Chapter 88:to me she is just a cute girl.
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Chapter 89:Let me the humble junior show you something..
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Chapter 90:Your family!
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Chapter 91:ah i am late.
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Chapter 92:I don't believe you.
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Chapter:93 Vs Aulia part 1
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Chapter 94:Vs Aulia part 2
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Chapter 95:Vs Aulia part final!Suprise attack!
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Chapter 96:Test!
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Chapter 97:Please go with me to the amusement park!(Alice)
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Chapter 98:Ideal type ..
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Chapter 99:You goddamn insect!!!
103
Chapter 100:Student council.
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Chapter 101:Student council prank.
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Chapter 102:Plan.
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Chapter 103:Leon and Claire...
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Chapter 104:Battle operator.
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Sorry guys becausw the bug the latest chapter is gone
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Chapter 105 fear.
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Chapter 106:Dad and mom
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Chapter 107:Magic is sure convenient.
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Chapter 108:THAT IS FREAKING IMPOSSIBLE!
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Chapter 109:I didn't hide it .
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Chapter 110:Why did they follow us.....
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Chapter 111:Request
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Chapter 112:Strenght is relative.
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Chapter 113:Really,i am amazed.
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Chapter 114:Then,let her die.
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Chapter 115:Protype weapon is good.
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Chapter 116:Offer
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This is not a chapter.
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Chapter 117:...........Why i am so unlucky...
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Chapter 118:School school like there is no tommorow
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Chapter 119:The Traitor.
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Chapter 120:You don't have right to be one.
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Chapter 121:The mom murderer.
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Chapter 122:Forvish Room Security!!
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Chapter 123:Reason
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Chapter 124:Reason(2)
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Chapter 125:The truth.
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Chapter 126:Iris confidence.
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Chapter 127:That is outrageous.
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Chapter 128:Stop it!!!!
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Chapter 129:Believe!!!
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Chapter 130:Mana growth and evolutions.
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Chapter 131 :Sudden interference.
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Chapter :132 The answer!
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chapter 133:Everyone reactions!
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chapter 134:Leon and Forvish
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Chapter 135 :Back to sweet home.
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Chapter 136 :Dinner and Problems
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Chapter 137:To be stronger
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Chapter 138:Lune School life
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chapter 139 :Mock battle
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Chapter 140:The outcome of match
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Chapter 141:cheer up!
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Chapter 142:Night strolling
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Chapter 143:Respective paths
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Chapter 144:First impression .
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Chapter 145:Home visit
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Chapter 146:Past and revenge.
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Chapter 147:bet
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Chapter 148:The result
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Chapter 149:Night meeting
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Chapter 150:family safety
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Chapter 151:Decision and request.
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Chapter 152:First priority
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This is not a chapter
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Chapter 153:Defeat
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Chapter 154 :Alice way too cheer up
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Chapter 155:Futile resistance part 1
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Chapter 156:Futile resistance part 2
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Chapter 157:Futile resistance part final
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Chapter 158:Fight?There is no need
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Chapter 159:Parents meeting
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Chapter 160:Jessica wish
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Chapter 161:Talk with jessica father
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Chapter 162:A Perfect person.
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Chapter 163:Yakuza?(Non edited)
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Chapter 164:I see.....(Unedited
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Chapter 165:A Choice.(Unedited)
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Chapter 166:A house for living.(Unedited)
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Chapter 167:Training.(Unedited)
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Chapter 168:Cursed of family.(Unedited)
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Chapter 169:First meeting(unedited)
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Chapter 170:Flower.
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Chapter 171:Night talk
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Chapter 172:tournament: prologue(Unedited)
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Chapter 173:First match!Easy win?
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Chapter 174:Conquering the castle
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Chapter 175:Experimental monster
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Chapter 176:Proof and Truth
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Chapter 177:Execution.
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Chapter 178:True form!!
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Chapter 179:Weaklings.
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Chapter 180:The answer.
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Chapter 181:Redeeming sin.
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Chapter 182:Yume true worth.
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Chapter 183;What do you want?
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Chapter 184:Creation ability.
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Chapter 185:Be confidence on the path you choose.
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Chapter 186:Easy going..
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Chapter 187:Sudden attack.
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Chapter 188:Kidnapped.
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Chapter 189:The next day..
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Chapter 190:The objective.
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Chapter 191:Escape from prison!!!
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Chapter 192:Arrival at the city.
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Chapter 193:Julius battle.
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Chapter 194:The battle just begin.
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Chapter 195:It should wait !!!
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Chapter 196:Start of 2 week break.
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Chapter 197:Going to school.
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Chapter198:Challenge and gift!!
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Happy new year!!!I got poll for you!!!
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Chapter 199:Heroes,you fail as parents.
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Chapter 200(Finally 200):Brand new arc!1
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Chapter 201:1st annivesary yay!!
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Chapter 202:Hero's plan
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Chapter 203:Teaching sakura.
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Chapter 204:Forvish past(4)(Still an Idiot )
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Chapter 205:Forvish past(5) When a lie become the truth.
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Chapter 207:Separation.
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Chapter 207:Decision of choice.
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Chapter 208:Born of new power.
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Chapter 209:End of the battle.
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Chapter 210:Christmas day.
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Chapter 211:The end of christmast day.(Unedited)
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Chapter 212:Feeling inferior(Unedited)
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Chapter 213:New enemy.
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Chapter 214:Coming of special guest..
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Chapter 215:Grandma thought
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Chapter 216:At the bottom chapter..
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Chapter 217:Cultis city.
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Chapter 218::I know them.
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Chapter 219:Decision.
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Chapter 220:Before the great escape(prologue)
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Chapter 221:Grand escape 01..
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222:Grand escape 02
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Chapter 223:Great escape 223
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Chapter 224:Grand Escape 04
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Chapter 225:Grand Escape 05
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Chapter 226:Grand Escape 06
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Chapter 227: Grand escape Epilogue.
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Chapter 228:Day before new year.
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Chapter 229:How my mom and dad become Idiotic couple?part 1
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Chapter 230:Mom and Dad Conflict.
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Chapter 231:Dad help mom without mom noticing.
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Chapter 232:Mom Fall in love with Dad.
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Chapter 233:Mom Confess his love at dad .
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Chapter 234:Crimson Flame essence 01
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Chapter 235 :Crimson Flame essence 02
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Chapter 236:Crimson Flame essence 03
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Chapter 237:Crimson Flame essence 04
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Chapter 238:Crimson flame essence 05
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Chapter 239:Crimson Flame Essence 06
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Chapter 240 :Crimson flame essence 07
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Chapter 241:Crimson flame essence 08
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Chapter 242:Crimson flame essence epilogue
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Chapter 243:Changing of view.
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Chapter 244: Half year later.
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Chapter 245:Being unfriendly.
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Chapter 246:Plagiarism(01)
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Chapter 247:Plagiarism(02)
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Chapter 248:Plagiarism(03)
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Chapter 249:Plagiarism 04
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Chapter 250:Plagiarism 05
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Chapter 251:Plagiarism 06
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Chapter 252:Plagiarism 07
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Chapter 253:Plagiarism End
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Chapter 254:Sadness and Happiness are side of the same coins(01)
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Chapter 255:Hapiness and Sadness are side of the same coin (02)
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Chapter 256:Sadness and Happiness are side of the same coins(03)
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Chapter 257:Sadness and Hapiness are the same side of coins (04)
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Chapter 258:Hapiness and Sadness are the same side of coins (05)
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Chapter 259:Endless Nightmare(1)
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Chapter 260:Endless Nightmare (2)
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Chapter 261:Endless Nightmare (03)
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Chapter 262:Endless Nightmare (04)
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Chapter 263:Endless Nightmare end..
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Chapter 264:??????
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Chapter 265:Knowing yourself(01)
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Chapter 266:Knowing yourself(02)
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Chapter 267:Knowing yourself(03)

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