Hey, thanks for all the support guys.
I have decided to do a rewrite of the story which is available here:
https://royalroadl.com/fiction/15725/bloody-killing-game
A case of theft: this story is not rightfully on Amazon; if you spot it, report the violation.
Reasons for the rewrite is that I wanted to change the MC into a stronger character (as per feedback received).
Also, improve upon some things such as changing the title to something more engaging, borrowing a more appealing cover art while I think about how I want to go about things.
Also I wanted to keep a darker mood for the story, and do some more character development.
Thank you very much!!