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My name is Erick Blackeman I was your average looking guy though I rarely spoke my mind.I went to college,never got married and you can laugh at me if you will but I never had sex,and to top it off i'm 30.I was a heavy rpg gamer that spent all my money on games and action figures.Sadly enough I died a virgin wearing khaki pants a vest and glasses at my job as a bank teller.Enough of that lets talk about the day I died.

*beep beep beep*  Erick:"Shut up." I get up from my bed then walk to my dresser and turn my alarm off.

I then did my daily routine of taking a shower,brushing my teeth, and getting dressed for work.

I start the regular walk to my job.Nothing really special happened other than a few people swearing but that's normal in new york.

After the 20 minutes of walking I arrive at the bank I went in and everything seemed to be fine until a masking man came in with a pump shotgun.

*BANG* ???:"Everybody get on the ground this is a robbery!" *Everybody gets down to the floor*

???:"If you all cooperate I promise you wont be harmed,Now whoever knows the code to the vault stand up and come over here."

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Erick:"I do."

I get up off the floor and walk over to him.

???:"Okay then what's the code mister...?"

Erick:"Its Erick Blackeman."

???:"Okay then Erick,if you would please tell me the code so I can be on my way to my grumpy wife."

'...that's unfair god why are you so cruel to give him a woman but not me!'

God:"Because he has done something in his life." God says in a calm voice

'....'

???:"Hello?"

Erick:"Sorry... I believe the code is 6-7-6-5-8-9."

'If I remember that code will activate the silent alarm'

???:"Why thank you,and may you have better luck in your next life."

*BANG*

I fall on the ground.

'How strange have I been...Shot!'

I look down at my body

'Wait a second is that my rib cage?'

I look up to that masked man he was laughing.

I smile and say.

Erick:"...Fucker..."

Everything turns black.

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