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'' Characters thoughts
""Character speaking
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1 year later
I am currently 1 years old and I can grasp some of the language my parents speak.
From my parents conversation I now know theirs and my name.
If I'm getting it correct my moms name is Chaenath VonWolfe ,and
my dad is Ingolfr Vonwolfe and last but not least I am Christopher Vonwolfe.
Cool sounding right I mean at least I won't sound weird while banging a woman...anyway.
Chaenath feeds me from her amazing chest.
Though I never saw her eat anything the past year she has been feeding me.
Until that one fateful day I saw her biting into my fathers neck.
That's correct ladys and gentleman my mom is a vampire.
The most humorous part is my dad is a werewolf from one of those fanfics!
'Oh thank you god for this awesome family'
???:"You're Welcome"
'...'
'Strange...'
Chaenath walks into my room which is on the second floor.
Chaenath:"Hey there little man."Chaenath said in a cheerful voice while picking me up.
Chaenath:"I'm bringing you to work."
Christopher:"What-work?"I said in a inquisitive voice
Chaenath:"I'm a librarian."
'Oh fountain of knowledge here I come'
My mom picks me up and we go outside.
The surrounding buildings are made of wood and cobblestone.
My neighbors is a fox looking beast man family.
They have a son Armin who is 4 and already seems to be guarding her like a knight and princess the daughter is named Karen she is 3 years old.
If I were to describe her appearance,it would be breath taking.
Though it's her eyes Pink and blue eyes that complete capture you.
'That is definitely a candidate for a future harem'
Chaenath:" What are you doing Chris?"
'Staring at 1 of my future lovers'
Christopher:"Nothing mommy."
'Better not alarm Chaenath'
We continue our walk to the library
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20 minutes later
When we arrive my Chaenath drops me off
Chaenath:"How about you get the alphabet book."
Mom points at a book on the desk.
Christopher:"Okay."
I walk up to the chair I climb up it got the book and mom gets to her job of organizing the books.
After an hour of painfully reading the book this happened
DING!
Quest Complete!Reward/sYou can now understand and can fluently speak and write Germic
DING!
Wis +10Int +12Think Status if you wish to see your current status
'Statu...'
???:"Hold on there young one I wish to speak with you."A cold voice interrupting me spoke.
'Yes?'
???:"Interesting I wasn't actually expecting you to hear me child do you know why you can hear me?"she said in a inquisitive voice.
???:"Nevermind,my name is Athena goddess of knowledge,and I would like to give you my blessing do you want it?"
The Goddess Athena wishes to give you her blessing do you acceptYes/No
Christopher:"Yes I accept your blessing"
I feel a sharp pain on my back
Athena:"Wise choice"
DING!
I lose my consciousness...everything goes black.
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If you guys see something wrong or if im a little to slow/face paced please tell me your comments can help me improve ^-^
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This took me 2 hours because the tables were confusing me a little bit >-<.