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(john)"huuh" 'click' (mom) its time to wake up, quickly if i come back i will tack the shit that you love.

(john) 'are you the devil' "OKEY AM UP"

there it goes another day anothe week another month eta eta but today is deffernt and its because 'knock knock' (my elder sister)"JOHN I WANT TO TALK TO YOU"(john)'great' "okey come in" 'tick' she opens the door and comes in(eld sister)"can you at least wear something"(john)"am on et what is't that you want angelica"(angelica)"i want you to join the carpentry club"(john)"why? and no"(angelica)what do you mean why and because there is beautiful girls and i want you to join and you got notheng better to do you're always at home"(john)'nothing better to do huh i use to be outside everyday in middle school, i used to have friends,will fake friends they always ditch when there was a fight, and beautiful girls in the carpentry club, why?,and i don't like to des myself but am not that good looking, average face that's not a bad thing right but i have scars all over my face from fighting, and a fit body which is great i guess, average height which is1.6m, i think i never measured myself,never had the chance i guess,i stopped going outside after middle school i just got tired and now i have vedio games,anime,novels, to keep me entertained and occupied and now im gonna have less'

(john)"no, and there is no good reason for me to join"

(angelica)"oh really okay i didn't want to do this MOM!!!"(john)'oh great'

'kick,kick up the staires she goes comes near the door on the left'(mom)"what" 'comes in' " for christ's sake wear some clothes"(john)"sorry mom" 'shit' (mom) "am not youer mom call me by my name suzan okey how many times do i have to tell you this"(john) sorry i just woke up"(susan)"what do you want honey"(angelica)"mom john doesn't want to help me in my project i the carpentry club"(susan)"WHAT"(john)'oh great'(susan)" i can't believe you will do something like this ever sense your father died you've been going out and now in highschool you've been stuck in the house every day what next impregnat somebody and then leve, you know you're just like your father(john)"okey m-susan am gonna join*sigh*"(susan)"good, now hony get ready for school, and you wear something already"(john)"okey"

susan leaves to go for work(angelica)"see you at the club*wink*"and she leaves i stand up from my bed and get dressed while doing that i look at the clock in the corner of the room the 5 thing in the room its 6:50pm its okay im always late idont know how angelica gets in time but she gets one of her friends to drive her, you may think why isn't susan my mom its because my father christopher was her second husband, her first husband left her and my mom died after my birth, i dont know how they met but they got along and they got married, at the beginning i didn't care it was always me and my father against the world you know, i thought it was just a phase, angelica hated me and my dad i didnt care and susan was nice to me she wanted me to call her mom and shit, and she just looked like angelica but with black hair instend of angelica brunette hair and shes little bit taller than her at 1.8m, angelica at 1.7m by the way, and heart like face insted of angelica round face,she and her daughter look beautiful in there on way i guess,my father told me that shes gonna be my mom and talk to her like she's my mom you know like till her secrets, tell her when you feel sad you know like me he said, and he laught(dad)"haha we're gonna be a happy family right john"(me)"yeah dad",and he died in a car accident in no less he said that he was the greatest car driver ever, i feel a cold sensation in my hand oh great im crying im gonna     be late again, and that was 5years ago

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i go down the stairs to the living room and right to the kitchen,i put toast in the toaster and wait,i look around at the house its a normal house i think, 1 attic where you keep shit i gusse, 3 rooms upstairs 1 of them is a bath 2 room one of them is angelicas and the other one is for me,my room used to be angelicas closet, i used to be sleep in hear room 6 years ago,it changed 3 years ago because of highschool and my age which is 17 by the way ,angelicas 18,susan ??? never bothered really,and 5 rooms at the ground level,living room,a bath,a kitchen, a bedroom, and her first husband offece,and aberrantly they may get together,i heard that from angelica she's pretty happy about that

you my ask why am i with susan if shes not my mother,i guess let's start from the beginning,7years ago oneday my father come back to our apartment happy he said(father)"john!JOHN! WHERE ARE YOU"(john)"DAD! AM IN THE BATHROOM" dad goes to the bathroom door and(father)"oh you scared the shit out me is there a problem"(john)"no dad just takin a shit"(father)"haha you know what i talked about talking dirty"(john) yeah yeah dad*i open the door and go the couch* dont talk too much in front of you and don't talk like that in school unless it's with friends*i set*"dad comes over and sets next to me and turns on the tv(father)"and not on the street,the park and the supermarket,you know what every where expect with friends, you know when you older"(john)"yeah i know,so what's the rush"(father)" okey*enhales*iv met this beautiful woman in the supermarkret*sigh*i can't lie to you it was through online dating okey(john)"okey"(father)"anyway we were going out for a year now and i thenk next year we will move in,are scared john"(john)"maybe i don't know,who is she"(father)"its okay to be scared and her name is susan and she has a daughter one year older and maybe she'll be your sister, you got it john"(john)"what's that supposed to mean?dad"(father)"hahaha nothing nothing sorry about that,anyway make your heart ready okey son"(john)"okey dad"

1 year later,arriving at susan's house useing a taxi,my dad car broke down like always,dad walks to the front door with our luggage drops it*deck*with me behind he faces the door*inhales,exhales* *ding dong* i hear someone screaming(??susan??)"he may be at the door go get dressed and smile okey honey"i hear footsteps*kick kick,tick opens the door*(susan)"ah christopher your finally here"(father)"sorry honey got stuck in traffic"(susan)"its okay love*looks at me*that must be john*she leans"call me mom okey honey"hugs me* i see behind her a little girl with an angry face*tink toaster noise* anyway a year later dad died and she emotionally took me i think,i take the toast,i look up to the clock 7:30,30 more minutes to for school and i think i will take 40 minutes on foot,great, i step out of the house.