[Update] Chapter 2 Revision – Open to Feedback!

Hey everyone! I've made some modifications to Chapter 2 to improve the pacing, world-building, and overall flow of the story. I want to make sure the experience feels immersive and engaging, so if you have any thoughts, suggestions, or feedback, I'd love to hear them!

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This is still a work in progress, and I'm open to any advice that could help refine the story further. Let me know what you think! 😊