Hey guys, hope your having a good day.  This is the update thread, where I'll post all the information about my actions with the book.

Today:

1. Chapter 2 has been edited, please leave your opinions in comments for me :)

2. Still need some art for the story- not borrowing other's pictures. Kanadaj has graciously offered to work on a cover art in his spare time, and my cute little sister is also making one for me (she got art gene, i got words) If anyone wants to draw up Hunie, that would be swell :p

You might be reading a stolen copy. Visit Royal Road for the authentic version.

When I add to this thread, I'll change the date, so look every once and awhile :)