Ok. I had to read through the story to check some details, names and all that stuff.

I am ashamed of the abysmal quality of my writing.

Here is what's gonna happen. I will finish reading and taking notes some time tomorrow, publish a new chapter soon after... then continue writing the story, while rewriting the mess left behind.

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Like... holy shit. It's painful to read. So many misspelt words, missing words, skipped descriptions... Mads being an airhead does not excuse the severe lack of detail I provided.

Fuck.

No hiatus though, don't worry. (I think I will keep writing new and fixing old chapters until I catch up with fixes to the most recent chapter - whichever it will be at the time - then figure out Patreon as a place to post drafts and have edited stuff on RR... will take a month or two... new chapters won't stop coming during that time)

Fuck.

I like the ideas I went for... but... holy hells... (also need to entirely remove a couple of sentences since they create plotholes... kinda)