So guys after rereading the story and giving it some thought I've come to a decision. I am going to rewrite the story. I've noticed things about it were inconsistent, not explained well enough and a bit shallow in certain regards. There are also some plot holes and immature writing in certain parts. The rewrite will be done with the same main character, same world I've builded but that is about all I can say for sure that will remain the same. I would like to hear some of your thoughts on the matter and I would love to know what you guys think. Please offer any suggestions on how this story could be made better and I will certainly read and consider them. I've also placed a poll to measure the feelings of the general readers that follow this story still. Thank you once again, Karnage.

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