Hi, it’s my first ever fiction and I hope that I would be able to satisfy you with my way of writing. It may not be as creative or soulful but I believe that I can capture your attention. My writing may not be the best and it truly is simplistic but then again, everyone starts out fresh. I just hope that in due time, my writing shall improve.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________
<><><><><><><><><><><><><><>
IN ONE OF THE MANY GALAXIES
<><><><><><><><><><><><><><>
Chapter 0
In the far off galaxy, a bright and colorful dense ball of light was casually floating around. The bright light had a rainbow hue that would leave anyone that looks it’s way would leave them paralyzed from the beautiful scene. Why was it here? It just came to be but it wasn’t alone because there was another ball of light, only smaller. The smaller ball of light was slowly circulating around the bigger ball of light.
Throughout the years together, the two balls of light have gained conscience and was able to communicate by sending a grain of their energy towards each other. Through this, they were able to transmit feelings and emotions they have never felt before. Eventually, the two did not have to send energy in order to communicate and were able to create a bond stronger than any other. Together, they both were able to experience emotions and feelings they have never before. After coming across so many planets and dimensions, they were able to learn and acquire all the knowledge like a sponge. Learning everything together, both started to feel the feeling of jealousy and envy at the same time. Well, not exactly at the same time but maybe a few seconds or minutes behind or ahead of each other.
Ahem, we are getting off topic so back to....ummm… where was I again?
Ahhh, right. The two saw how the inhabitants of planets they came across had physical forms and they did not. Of course they would feel envy. They both wished to have a physical form yet they knew that they were different. In order to lessen the gap between the inhabitants and the two orbs, the bright balls of light named each other. They’ve seen how a new life is born into existence and named after birth. The newborn is named after coming to the world by what they call parents.
The names they gave each other was Omet and Pont. The one named Omet was the rainbow colored hue ball of light while the other was called Pont. They did not know why they called each other such names but it was just a feeling. It was as if the whole universe wanted them both to be named that way but eh. Maybe it was just a mere coincidence. They were so happy about the names given by each other. Knowing that they had a name gave them a sense of enlightenment. Omet and Pont did not feel the envy but it only lasted for a while. Though I say a while, more like a century but to them it felt like a mere few days. Their way of time is quite different. After seeing so many galaxies after galaxies, they both got extremely bored. I mean, anyone would be bored seeing the same things over and over again. Especially when you are so different from others. Then something unexpected happened. Omet told Pont a ridiculously genius idea!
Enjoying this book? Seek out the original to ensure the author gets credit.
“How about using our energy to create a life for our own?” Omet suggested.
“And how exactly are we going to do that?” Pont replied. “What if we fail?”
“Is it not a better idea than staying here? I want to experience something new Pont. Haven’t you been feeling weird lately?”
“I have been feeling weird and not in a good way but there is danger. I can feel it. This weird feeling that if we do not get it right, we could seize to exist. Not being able to see you hurts way more than staying here.”
“I-I feel the same but together we can achieve such an outrageous idea. Please, I beg of you to trust me.” Omet pleaded, trying to convince Pont.
The ball of light thought for a minute. If it were to agree, they could finally experience being in a physical form but if they were to fail...both would no longer exist. If it were to deny such plea, it could upset Omet. Although they didn’t know that they were powerful enough to destroy galaxies. After a while, Pont finally agreed to it.
Hearing this, Omet glowed even brighter than before causing millions of stars to be sucked in.
“Whoops.”
So this is what happens when one of them gets excited. I wonder how they would fit in the new world they would later be born into.
“Might as well get this over with.” Pont said.
They both glowed and spinned around as if they were orbiting at each other.
Before they disappeared, Omet questioned Pont one last time.
“Now that I think about it, how would we find each other?”
Pont was shocked, they totally forgot to think about that! How irresponsible and stupid could they be to make such a blunder.
“Wha-” Then zshlup. Omet and Pont were now looking for a vessel perfect enough to deal with their power.
What they did not know was that someone had come to help them. More than one actually. A few entities had sealed their power and helped guide them to a suitable form they could be born to. The entities wished them luck and would continue to watch over them. Though the entities could not seal half of their power, it was enough for the body to get used to their power. The vessel needed time to hold and fuse with their soul. The seal would eventually break after successfully fusing.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________
Author’s Note
SO HOW WAS IT? Pretty good right? Well, I would not know if it’s good or not unless I get a feedback from you guys. Just hope that it was to your liking. I will probably go back and edit the chapters as time goes on because I’m currently thinking of how this story will go.