5 expolsions. 10 arrests. 5 ex-girlfriends. 6 victims. One messed up head. This was the life of jack. Since middle school he had been shunned at at the back of the class furiously studying, trying to appease any god or deity Who would forgive him. 

One rainy after noon,  no different from any other day, the thing happend.

Jack was just finishing copying down some algebraic formula when he felt the ground shake, cracks appeared on the floor enveloping the desks and other furniture and equipment in the class! He screamed as he thought the gates of hell were opening to day him away from his sins. A giant honey red burnt looking hands reached up and grabbed jack by the waist. It pulled him to the darkest part of the hole then dropped him. His vocal cords felt like they were shredded in a blender full of hot coals. Suddenly is body stopped moving. He caught his breath and calmed down. 

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He opened his eyes.

——–———————– author's  notes

hey this is my first novel :/ plz give criticism and ideas will make chapter one by Tuesday if I get any1 chatting to me I can get it by tomorrow so plz comment

-grimdust