I started writing because I was bored and had a much better time than I thought I would.

I was going with the flow, and having a nice time, this naturally means that everything is chaotic as all hell. And while it started fun I find myself interested in taking it a notch up, so I want to get it all cleaned up, I wasn't expecting things to go this far. It would be preferable, for whatever meager audience I've garnered. Work out an actual plot line instead of winging it every time.

There are all sorts of little things I'd like to touch up but a big point is the use of slang and such, I live in the U.S.A. Not that I need to tell you that I'm sure you figured that out on your own.

While the slang is natural to me and all my fellows, people who read in other countries would likely have trouble understanding and I'd like accessibility as much as possible.

I'd like to build up a backlog of 20 chapters for editorial freedom instead of rolling with the punches like I've been doing.

These are just a few examples. This means you probably won't be seeing me for a good while, most definitely a few months at a minimum.

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Let's go over a few more, such as the description of Azarov's Locket, which claims that it leaks crimson. In this case, I meant blood, not the crimson in the vials, there's 1 example of a pretty major slip-up.

The difference between skill, skills, and magical skills is not nearly clear enough. A spell is a skill that uses mana, a skill skill uses either stamina or nothing at all.

See, that's kind of a mess, and what I hope to prevent in the future.

Another example is the use of guns, they will play a major role I'm sure you figured that out by now. I've been using actual guns, and honestly, I can't be fucked to keep finding out whether or not this firearm company has a history of infringement lawsuits being filed in such a case it's annoying as all hell.

The people who know less about guns would likely appreciate that as well.

One more thing that bugs me is the synopsis, I think it's just kind of a mouthful, I'll probably go with something more "vague," and "enticing."

Anyway, that's enough bitching about my dislike of my mistakes, I'll be seeing you, at some point, someday.

Anyway here's a word limit ramble:

Instant Oatmeal, that stuff sucks. I've no idea why people like it so much it's just awful, no body or soul, empty. I much prefer whole Oats with some nice chew, makes it feel like I'm eating something and not sucking down slop. It's like cinnamon crunch, people seem to love it but I find it to be absolutely revolting in every manner.

Bagels too, I'll never understand why the good masses love bagels so much.