So I've been overworking my fingers the last couple of days to write 3-4 chapters of this book daily.

I have three other books I update 6 days a week on Patreon so the work hasn't been easy.

Anyway, I've pretty much given you a taste of the world, the characters, and how the power system is. Now all I'm asking of you is some feedback so I may know where my weakness lies.

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This is my first cultivation novel so I really need feedback.

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